Hott Shitt..!! Need Feedback Plz. Re-post Slept-on..
I POSTED THIS A WHILE BACK, BUT ONLY A FEW PPL GAVE F/B LIKE 2-3,
I KNOW THIS IS HOTT.... PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK...
IM REALLY UPPN THIS PIECE, FOR A GREAT TOPICAL......
TEMPEST....
Weathered by ignorance...these torrential pains fall with regularity,
he fights to maintain his dexterity to retain his focus...in hopes
uncertainty might dissappear like a magic trick's..."hocus-pocus",
ravaged by fear and prejudice like rain starved lands raped by locust...
for the closest he has come to equality is measured by an unbalanced
quantity...an inaccurate ratio which reduces to like one out of thirty....
hes beenrunn'n through the trenches, measuring success in inches,
so of course underneath his finger nails are dirty...dry skin cracked, sweaty palms calloused...forced to pleasure himself like perverted hands to phallus,
yet this civilization wonders why he harbors so much malice towards
this land's unsheathed sword of ignorance...swung at neck level,
weilded by the hands of hatred with intent to silence his anger...while
subsequent wounds allow patince to dwindle and reservoirs of under
standing to run empty...trying to gain admittance like "open-sezza-me"
yet entrances remain closed by corrupted powers that be...no access
granted, no regards to his humanity...his troubles...his scuffles...his
stumbles...his struggles with a false sense of independence outlined in
outdated proclamations that emancipated...diluted by separated
equality...the idiocy jim crow laws created...idiosyncrasies of manhood
reudced by a society which stated he was inferior...different cultures,
different features, yet indentical interiors...he wears his strife like
military stars and stripes to show he shall not yeild on life's
battlefield,cut's and bruises he sometimes confuses with abraisions
inflicted by slavery...for within him the innate knowledge of the
serenghetti is sealed...uses his jagged-edge past as a protective shield
to prevent duplication of events leading to desolation in association
with non-rememberance...dedicated to by-passing interference caused
by the glow of his shaded appearance...with adherance to the light
of his logic, the darkness of ignorance remains microscopic...
especially when the featured topic is survival...and the title for the
chapters of his life are longevity...bound by heredity he is inherently
a warrior, apparently a destroyer to oppositions, previously
mentioned, that cant help but to pay attention to his raw mistique,
the intricate techniques he uses for persona, shen thin skins of cynicism
like growing iguanas, so the thick skins of assertiveness' are the only
layers shown...so he can care less what it takes to impress, for it is,
'to each his own'...known for his might, sifting for insight to light
muted paths he must tread...lead by instinctive desires a man acquires,
a cuisine of self preservation that adolescents fed...hungry for respect,
hungry for love, starving for a sweetened taste of knowledge...eager
to ingest food for thought that will allow him to know himself....
for he is the epitome of resiliance...weather the storm strong man....
withstand the brutal nature of the tempest.......
GIVE FEEDBACK PLZ...
HOLLA:
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post2132973
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