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Thread: Step-up

  1. #1
    .Spitualistic.
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    Thumbs up Step-up

    FEEDBACK PLZ....

    Accidents happen when you entangled in false rapp'n,
    Battln cannaballistic statures, aint digg'n u actorz,
    I been bombn sites, b4 the invention of shrapnel,
    Destryoing all competition wit exquizite spits thats sick
    Extremist, activist in rappn, backlashing faggits,
    skirmish kids, nervous I could feel ya gasp'n,
    You'll neva murda a track, join'n skill'd assasins,
    My actions reak havoc amongst the masses,
    N my styles like MTV cuz I punk'd yall asses,
    exterminatn perpatrators, wit a murderous sentiment,
    ya rymes mo' sweet'a than, burries-n-cinn'am'N,
    contemplation of fight'n back, betta not cross ya mindz,
    call me a fisher man the way I toss ya lines,
    sever ya neck from ya spine, only time you'll ever be ahead of
    mines(minds)
    come across as wack with troublesome problems,
    i got mind bogglers for groupies, wont U swallow A little,
    fruity nicca, wont ya follw a skittle,
    enigma of elements, I seen knowledge abliss,
    yall could neva beat me in a battle, poundn ya fists,
    definition of a disbeliever, fanatic of falsehood,
    I got U wearing different color hoodies, sayin you so hood
    my bars gotta bang'n sound like thump'n hammers,
    only time ya shit be hard, is when it bust through pampers......

    gedd@me KALIKOZE9/11......


    FEEDBACK PLZ....

    MY 2EW LINKS.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...38#post2140238
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...59#post2140359

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  2. #2
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    yo dis pretty hott im feelin all those multies u used i like the flo it sounds like u put sum emotion in it keep workin on it

  3. #3
    .Spitualistic.
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    ayo i appreciate the feedback, i did work on it alittle bit, im tryna up my vocab...
    thanks....
    Ill rtrn the fav. holla


    KALIKOZE9/11

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  4. #4
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    yo, i saw some emotion in there n i was feeling da multies flo was kewl, i think u could possible make dis longa too

    peace out

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