10 lines....no dr, cv, hv, biting, blind spit...due in 30
Foreshadow
ExEcUtUnA
10 lines....no dr, cv, hv, biting, blind spit...due in 30
Checking In..........................
Aiyo....Foreshadow is a hint to tell wats about to come NEXT/
Does the foreshadow u readin give ya a hint bout this TEXT/
Like how i creap up from behind and take the WIN/
Im like the prince of persia, realease my warrior WITHIN/
Executuna reck fools with ease in a quick BATTLE/
facin me ur out like a Blind kid in a game of SCRABBLE/
My personals give yu cuts , scrapes and other REGRETS/
Cuz im know to bend bars like fat kids on swing SETS/ ---bars meanin lines<<rap lines
This verse was fun but it has to END/
for broken Foreshadows, it be hard to MEND/
Kick back and bust raps that won’t succeed
You’re better off in the OM rappin about weed
Maybe you should kill yourself and make my job easy
Because when the votes are in I’ll take this freebee
Ms. Ex with his dick between his legs running away
I bet front lines would have a field day on your ass if you’d stay
What’s wrong that doesn’t even turn you on
Your skills are just ridiculous humorous like your fat ass in a thong
Because you picked that name doesn’t mean you hand out death
Your just like most of the whack newbies who get fucked in the chest
Uppin for some votes.....
Will vote on battles if links are left...
Uppin for votes as well....also will return the feedback
Uppin for some damn votes people. c'mon......
wuts good, im new 2 tha site so if u dont wana count my vote its all good.
i think Executuna won dis battle
breakdown:
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Personals:Exe
Complexity:FS
Flow:Exe
Metas:Exe
ders much more but dats jus general, so my vote goes 2 Executuna..nice battle
easy
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Kick back and bust raps that won’t succeed
You’re better off in the OM rappin about weed
merked form da beginniing with dis line...Good Job!!!!
vs.
Nothing
U really need to elevate ex u have good concepts but ur wording is to simplistic... good try man keep it up....
v/Fore...and both of y'all hit my battle wth chin3s3god or fif-t u choose!!!!!!!!
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yo fore rtf man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks for the vote but you didnt poll it.. I take it you dont have enough posts.. I'll hit up your battles..
could you do the others or at least the china guy plz fore i will rtf if u have another link or I will in the future!!!!
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u didn't poll man
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executiona- your verse was uhh meh. prince of persia? wtf?
you had some really whack lines. you need to concentrate on more
witt and harder punches. elevate
foreshadow- hmm...werent you more of a topical head?
i remember you. but anyway your verse was eh.... average.
you threw punches that hit harder..but it wasnt all that great
either. work on creativity/wordplay.....
and note.. sex jokes are played to hell. elevate
v/foreshdow
beter overall verse.
I was topical but I'm trying to battle. Uppin for more votes.
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