Lay Doubt. vs. B-Rabbit

[Lay Doubt.]

Okay Eminem.

12 lines.

Due midnight, pacific time.

You're done yo.

[B-Rabbit]

yo...bitch ass wannabe battle me think he a MC/
like he the one N only good rapper on RB/
well bitch you aint shit nutthin butta has-bin admit it/
your rhymes are juss lyrically unfitted you can be chewed up and spitted/
i can merk you rip you kno doubt afta this battle you been offically "layed out"/
all of your battles your rhymes have juss been wasted.../
.....even tho every single line was copyed and pasted/
you say Violence Uprising neva seen sum 1 as bad very well suprising/
your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/
so stay outta raps until ya mide adapts end ya witha 1-2 pucnch make ya spine collapse/
you all fake shoot bottle caps get them form tha store go and do ya country shit tha music you were borin for/

Out.

[B-Rabbit]

its due.....

[Lay Doubt.]

11:07 Pacific Time, right now.. stfu.


aiyo.. i'm worried for you, all in a hurry to lose
you dope?.. like a reporter asking a question..
..that's some curious news
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob

[[H]allelujah]

your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/

your best line and man it wasn't too good either rabbit...man u got better than this show off a lil man...Nice TRy!!!

it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob

Hey man nice job....I like your style nad this ^^^ was very well put together becuz it flowed nicely...sorry rabbit but lay doubt came a little better man...

Imma vote for Lay Doubt...but hey good battle guys...you 2 hit my sig battles and layed hit my one vs. xplicit for sho man thanx and good job to both parties!!! later!!!

v/Lay Doubt

[headlinez]

ay i dont kno if im allowed to vote on these battles but i like to break the battles down so yall can count it or not up to yall


[b-rabbit]

i can merk you rip you kno doubt afta this battle you been offically "layed out"/(nice line but wheres the rest of the bar)

all of your battles your rhymes have juss been wasted.../
.....even tho every single line was copyed and pasted/(this was a koo lil bar)

you say Violence Uprising neva seen sum 1 as bad very well suprising/(again wheres the rest of the bar)

your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/(nice lil punch/personal)

overall this wasnt a good battle verse. it could of been alot betta. keep it up pimpin u will elevate believe me.

no beef just da truth.


[layout]

it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit(koo lil punch)

i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit(this punch was ur best and it wasnt much)

if u really r 24-0 i dont kno how. this wasnt much of a verse either. just keep it up i guess.


overall i thought this was not much of a battle but here is my decision

my vote goes to B-rabbit just cuz he had more punches. u did have the best punch but he just hit wit more.
so hate it or go wit it.

like i said u dont have to accept da vote but i did it honestly.

no beef just da truth.

~1~

[B-Rabbit]

good battle man....UPPIN^^

[Tony B]

yo...bitch ass wannabe battle me think he a MC/
like he the one N only good rapper on RB/
uhh….no
well bitch you aint shit nutthin butta has-bin admit it/
your rhymes are juss lyrically unfitted you can be chewed up and spitted/
once again no
i can merk you rip you kno doubt afta this battle you been offically "layed out"/
umm….this isn’t even a whole bar so……..NO
all of your battles your rhymes have juss been wasted.../
.....even tho every single line was copyed and pasted/
you can prolly guess by now what Im gonna say
you say Violence Uprising neva seen sum 1 as bad very well suprising/
once again it’s only one line, wheres the rest of the bar dumbass
your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/
lemme see……..no
so stay outta raps until ya mide adapts end ya witha 1-2 pucnch make ya spine collapse/
nope
you all fake shoot bottle caps get them form tha store go and do ya country shit tha music you were borin for/
and again no




aiyo.. i'm worried for you, all in a hurry to lose
you dope?.. like a reporter asking a question..
..that's some curious news
nah, coulda been better
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
decent
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
ok
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
like this
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob
nice closer

vote-lay doubt, don’t see how the fuk b-rabbit even got one vote
ummm……..elevate, A LOT b-rabbit

[God'$LyricalGift]

yo ill vote on this battle if you guy's vote on
God'$LyricalGift vs Lyrical Burst
it would be much appreciated...good looks

[Lay Doubt.]

it doesn't work like that. ^

you didn't poll your vote Mak.

upping for votes.. leave links.

[Dep!ct]

please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards

vs

werid attempts at self glory...i think.


anyways... B-Rabbit is clearly under the impression that he's dope.


Your not.


v/geno






look for my battles if you will.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial

[Nephew J]

B-Rabbit:
yo...bitch ass wannabe battle me think he a MC/
like he the one N only good rapper on RB/
-attempted diss, not a good can-o-whoopass opener
well bitch you aint shit nutthin butta has-bin admit it/
your rhymes are juss lyrically unfitted you can be chewed up and spitted/
-nice hit, fix tha struc
i can merk you rip you kno doubt afta this battle you been offically "layed out"/
all of your battles your rhymes have juss been wasted.../
-where's rhyme, ya fell off on ya rhyme scheme, good insult
.....even tho every single line was copyed and pasted/
you say Violence Uprising neva seen sum 1 as bad very well suprising/
-aight line
your 24-0 even thoguh you battled every newbie who eva said HELLO/
althoght against me you get ruptured juss like a structure and ya flow/
-I like that, I like that, punchin a nigga
so stay outta raps until ya mide adapts end ya witha 1-2 pucnch make ya spine collapse/
you all fake shoot bottle caps get them form tha store go and do ya country shit tha music you were borin for/
-rhyme? punch-kinda, struc
overall-not to bad, i gotta check tha other cat's now, but work a lil on struc
Lay Doubt
aiyo.. i'm worried for you, all in a hurry to lose
you dope?.. like a reporter asking a question..
-rhyme scheme?
..that's some curious news
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
-rhyme scheme?horrible struc
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit
-fuck ya struc but nice lil diss
it's the saddest of shit, so now you can see faggot
that your verses are the reason we don't wanna B-Rabbit
-like that like that hit 'em
please scrap it, cuz honestly, i'm tired of these wack herbs
you're supposed to drop dope.. BR must have RB backwards
-haha, good one niggy
you'll never last nerd, and for real, this here is an illin' job
so watch me end your Hope so fast... I'll get accused for killin' Bob
-aight closer
overall fix tha struc up a lil, ya fell off ya rhyme scheme a lil, keep up wit that an it wasn't too badd of a verse there playa
V/this dude Lay Doubt here for tha better verse on this script

hit this up here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172999
honestly

[Lay Doubt.]

lol, you break it down like this dawg..

aiyo.. i'm worried for you, all in a hurry to lose
you dope?.. like a reporter asking a question..
..that's some curious news

one bar.. ^

i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit

another bar.. ^


it's just a different set up.. but the structure and rhyme scheme was straight.

Thanks for the vote, I'll check that link in a minute.. if you want a battle voted on Dep!ct, leave a link.. cuz I'm not gonna go hunting for one..


3-0, my lead.. more votes please.

[Dep!ct]

yea, forgot too

here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174654

[tre-pound]

flip yeah man,
b-rab, go ryte in ur rhyme book, cause u cant rap in real life......
no good lines or punches, structure was wack joe, u should stick to workin at the detroit press man..........
overall i give you a 3/50, for tryin....

lay dout, nice punches, all of them conected, b's k.o'd, all ur lines were dope but liked dis one the most...."
i'm furious too, smackin a bitch that's lackin the wit
think that battle in your sig is funny? it's just pathetic..
..and we ain't laughin' a bit"
27/50
vote/ld