10 lines...
due in 1 hour...
blind...
yeah..
vote honestly you little bastards...
10 lines...
due in 1 hour...
blind...
yeah..
vote honestly you little bastards...
check............................................. .......
yea Twix. im here. Good Luck.
Checkit…
Eyo, to me it seems insane what’s in a name can fit so perfect
i mean i don’t even needa thing to say…
…this bitch already claims he’s worthless!
X’s meant to shine,
while twixn struggles to invent an effect rhyme…
or find…
a decent way to word it
i hurt kids…twix is just another emo faggot afraid to surface,
a herb….just a nerd bitch, making the dirtlist of weak textcees
so fuck try’n to vex me…
how the fuck are you legit...when u rep a crew that jocks ICP!
u’r lyrics equal bird shit…………… cuz all u’r drops are just a mess
the best say less is more, but u’ll always stay pathetic moral less…
keep’n me bored at best…
Fucking me up in this battle? Please… u’r lines redefine celibate
cuz
hero’s & legends are always remember & both ARE NOT irrelevant
To clear some ish up...
The verse is weird like that in the middle to mock my punch,
i have a feeling alot of kiddies here will think that it's just
skattered all crazy like. Also, to Twix... its 10. G/L
stick em up? too bad this guys saggin, has no idea...
n... sure the kid el drop hard, with s fist full of viagra
heard he comes with personals... fuck that!
counting someone elses losses...
...don't make yah shit all that
so ill traumitize sirusX and whats next?
hes joining forggoten crews like TNL so he could flex
n' sure he made it to the next level... with god
but shit we already see threw you n' ya idols fassad
aint dangerouse...bitch yah too busy watching your back
so face forward... and stop pretending your black
finally unbanned.... uppin this.... btw nice verse sirus.
vote here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174509
Eyo, to me it seems insane what’s in a name can fit so perfect
i mean i don’t even needa thing to say…
…this bitch already claims he’s worthless!
ight
X’s meant to shine,
while twixn struggles to invent an effect rhyme…
or find…
no fucking gay
a decent way to word it
i hurt kids…twix is just another emo faggot afraid to surface,
nah not feeling it aye
a herb….just a nerd bitch, making the dirtlist of weak textcees
so fuck try’n to vex me…
how the fuck are you legit...when u rep a crew that jocks ICP!
lol
u’r lyrics equal bird shit…………… cuz all u’r drops are just a mess
the best say less is more, but u’ll always stay pathetic moral less…
decent
keep’n me bored at best…
Fucking me up in this battle? Please… u’r lines redefine celibate
cuz
hero’s & legends are always remember & both ARE NOT irrelevant
ight
stick em up? too bad this guys saggin, has no idea...
n... sure the kid el drop hard, with s fist full of viagra
haha good
heard he comes with personals... fuck that!
counting someone elses losses...
...don't make yah shit all that
lol
so ill traumitize sirusX and whats next?
hes joining forggoten crews like TNL so he could flex
haha word
n' sure he made it to the next level... with god
but shit we already see threw you n' ya idols fassad
lmao
aint dangerouse...bitch yah too busy watching your back
so face forward... and stop pretending your black
LOl
this battle was pretty weak.. syrius had 1 good bar.. and ur structure was FUCKED son.. hard to read.. trixm came consistant and had a better structure..
this battle goes to him
v/tixm
uppin................ leave links and ill drop an honest vote...
Originally Posted by SMOKE
lol...
u didnt even break up the bars right kiddo.
uppin..... meh.....................................
nice spit sirus that was tight
thx, twix did well to... suprised me alot.
drop a vote neutral, break it down so we can both see what we need to improve on.
uppin............................................. ..
his idea... used in this post.
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