CALL'N-OUT-------> black_ceazer.!!!!

[KªL¡]

Faster than Hispanics I spit sick scriptures across...
so like a 'misplaced photo' you can already 'picture ya loss'
describe YOU wit one word: false, ya lives 'disposable like diapers'...
cus I 'dont take crap' from opposable fighters
You gettin' dropped, for claimin' that you spittin' hott. ..
HE thinks-he's 'ill' cause he plays tha "thug roll" when tha truth is he's just a 'CHICKEN PAC'
dis kid is nautious-and-stressin, cuz he knows im like buttons on a bomb ya must be cautious-when-pressin. ..
ya wack raps are the cause-of-me-wreckin, once started there's no 'stoppin the fight' like pausin-ya-Tekkin,
you lost this time KALIKOZE'z the boss of ryhmes...
you could be blood vessles in my head,and still wouldn't cross my mind
Jus cause ya monitors rectangle don't mean ya "rhymes are in shape"...
You can't see me, "see through paper's" the only way my "lines can be traced"
I honestly speak when I say lyrically dis kids gettin ripped...
Eyes glued to my verse and still this kid cant stick to his script
Stear clear & go while I Eat this stupid pussy like a group of four~gay~bitches...
Left with 8 Stitches and at the same time im servin you like Gourmet Dishes
My metaphors, are better for, how their letters form. I set the norm wit~ clever scores...
Like Bach composing symphonies. You're Hip-hop prose simplicity. My words are foreborn';
Trampled to pieces, the thought processes probably insane...
You'd have a better chance of winning beef in a McDonalds monopoly game


next.....FAGGIT..!!!

GEDD@ME.
KALIKOZE9/11....

MY 2 LINKS:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...29#post2104329
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...45#post2104345

[KªL¡]

Uppn....

[da-one]

shit was hot some body juss got murdered, bad, 1st degree

you going to jail sonny with no trial or bail money
da way you killed dude you can say was hella funny
my question iz will he spit bacc some wacc shit
or will he juss chill and kicc bacc in dat casket

keep it up

[KªL¡]

AYO GOOD LOOKN, da_one;

IF U ACTUALLY LOOK@, THE DATE ON THE POST,
FAGGIT TAKN DAYS TO GET@ME, I THINK HE GOT SHOOK-N-STOOD HOME,

BEEN STEADY TRYNA COME @ ME WIT ONE LINERS, IN OTHER FORUMS,
HE A FUNNY CAT.. ITS JUST THAT HIS NO-SHOWS R START'N 2 GET BOR'N.

FEEL FREE TO HIT UP MY OTHER TEXT JUMPOFFS: ILL DO DA SAME


KALIKOZE9/11

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174326
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174787

[KªL¡]

Uppin...

[noncentz]

hotnessevery angle i could think of came flaming great job

[Gotti]

damn kali murked homie, lol man that verse was ill man

[KªL¡]

WORD~PERFECT; I appreciate the feedback, especially seeing you got
over 4k posts, so U been here for a minute, so I know, Im gett'n an honest
vote on how good this was. thanks, holla...

KALIKOZE9/11...

[Kairos]

I liked all the wordplay, definitely keep that up. The rhyming was good. Had some stretched lines, the context was good, maybe try and edit a little to get to the rhyme quicker. Don't sacrifice the strength of the punch though.