Round Here Remix

[Jeezey]

yah
yah...

Round here we throw them thangs.... Dont claim gangs.. But bang
Second we see a nigga cross the line its time....to blow his mind

Round here we move keyz ...with ease itz a breeze
Dont sneeze nigga... mistaken fa police........shoot 3 round cha

Round here we watch our backz.... full of crooked catz
we make them guns "Pow"- an lay you on ya back jack (take a nap)

Round here you get that feelin.... dat aint no time fa chillin
movin drugs an stackin pancakes......can ya fuckin feel it?

Round here ........................Dats Around here
The fear in ya guts.... got ya pumpin so much bloods

Round cha in the North.... but a nigga from the south
Pull it out....nigga....Stick it dead in her mouth Round here

Round here the pistols stay poppin..... money we coppin
Ya lackin... Black tint ....last monthes.. motha fuckiin rent

Itz there so go get..... got hoes.... but not pimpin
Neva caught me slippin....out cha not here

Round here get fixed...... only fuck with them pro's
Dont got license.....cars on MoMo's

Round here we work fa niggaz dats doin it big...
came out the slumz........ just ta feed they kids

Picture this.. 4 hits ...4 chicks... 4 gats... 6 sacks
Blue dust bust out of the bag... Round cha ...Round cha

We dont do dirt... but you still get merk... if you hold dat work...
turked... jurked... flip ...reload dat clip.....ate up like chips

Oh but thats round here...not there...niggaz be scarred
you know how I play it Out cha with no fear

Out Cha in streetz nigga stayed off dat weed..
N.O. to Minnesota this Jeeze.....this Jeeze,....Jeezey nigga

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N.O.'z finest... the harder the grind is... niggaz wear watches but dont know the time kid....Yeah Jeezey......Jeezey.....Jeeze.....Jay...Jay

(Fa show you nigga do you, Ima still do me im holdin up in this cold weather with out a sweata niggaz.......halla..) WHAZ HAPP'N

[black_ceazer]

the shits cool cuz u tryin to battle

[black_ceazer]

go first cuz

[Spit]

aight rhyme not realy much into it.... but its kewl cuz ya flowed a bit...
you need more vocab of course.....n need something making the intro a bit more eyecatchin or u wont get many people to read ya verz... its a decent drop....peace

[Spit]

return the favor n check my open mic.............

[Jeezey]

Black_ i'll battle ya braw....Halla back tommorrow whoodae....

[Spit]

u need two links that shows ya comments in order to keep this mic up.... peace

[Kairos]

Became repetitive with the setup. Work on your rhyming, you just put in anything that rhymes. Try to build up the context to a rhyme that has something to do with your story.

[Crowd-Pleaser]

this is ok, not really that creative though, ur structure is not really to great it gets kinda off every now and then but all in all it was ok, work on things that hit harder and being more creative u wanna try and say things no one has said before and just do ur thing and elevate u will be straight

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.