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due midnight tommorow
+..Ex-Calibur..+
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10lines
house rules
due midnight tommorow
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Iight then, I'll drop by tmrw at midnite..
BUMP...
Hurry up, I aint got all day to do this...
Punches are played, would throw personals but what the fuck is your name..
Calling me out? Thats a 'death wish' like goin to an evil church just to pray!!
Bitch, You verses are lame, Multis are wack and your concepts are horrid..
Beatin me? thats like sayin in that open mic I dropped you arent the orphin!!
Someone give this newbie a rhyme, Or pretty soon he will be using all mine..
Not only does he 'stand' defeated but like italics he gets 'pushed to the side'!!
Wit hooks to the eye I'll murk this gay, shoulda worked on ya verse for days..
Anticipatin for you to drop is like some 'fake gold', It's not 'worth the wait'!!
You drop nothing, Your not hot your soft, watch how easily I block punches..
Take that 3 from ya name an leave the x covered in blood like da stop button!!
Easy....
you say your the king be prepared to lose your crown/
when im threw with you your whole kingdom will bow down/
and his rhymes so bad that'll catch ganggreen/
when this battle threw hell be known as the queen/
i'll take your own sword and i'll puncture your chest/
fuck you homie you couldnt beat me if you used your best/
i'll slice you up like vega and leave you dead on the streets/
seein me rap is like given out treats as for you people just take a seat/
take your l its a given/
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sorry i messed up and hit the wrong buttton heres the last line
you woudnt be in para dise even if you was in heaven
sorry about that now people vote and dont just vote against me cause im an idiot
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V/ Caliber
Caliber, you came pretty good, some lines didn't seem to rhyme. Everything connected, good job on your part.
3x, you need to elevate bro. I mean, labelling your opponent as a queen isn't exactly a diss. Your flow was a bit off and your use of vocab is weak bro. Elevatate, keep practicin.
Return the favor on the battle with nDust. If you don't know what a topical is, don't vote then. Peace homies
- u n r e a L -
. . . and yet still keep shit real
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the one since '99
Ill Give It To Caliber If I Could Vote
Cuz The Otha Guy Stuff Had Lot Of Mistakes
Holla Come Hit Up My Battles
Da Kis Wit 1,000,000 Metaphors
Please return the favor. I took some time to hit up your battle ..
- u n r e a L -
. . . and yet still keep shit real
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the one since '99
I would vote but I don't have a 100 post...
Still Uppin..
Can we get some more votes up in this??????.......
uuuuurrrrrrr
Punches-Ex
Flow-Ex
Structure-3X
Vocab-none
Wordplay-EX
\V/-EX
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if i could i would give this to caliber his wasent as simple as 3x
Can we get some more votes up in this??, Please...
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