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Thread: point the finger in a mirror(naledge and word perfect)

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    point the finger in a mirror(naledge and word perfect)

    na~ledge
    Multi-colered skies provide a backdrops for silhouettes
    Surface 2 surface nuclear threats, symbols of death
    When faced with ones demise, explanations are clear
    To the reason the human race now found its way here
    Inaddiquate leaders diplomatic procedures are proved
    2 B the very opposite of the shit we feed in the news
    Endless pursuits 2 attain money power and respect
    Intertwined with neglect 4 da masses, classes n sects
    Of the world, Tried on confinment to social institutions
    Brings global upheaval,"WE'LL HAVE OUR REVOLUTION"
    Is their battle cry, Place blame on other for their woes
    Swear allegiance 2 their own, swear death 2 their foes
    Dramatic economic increses in the national war budget
    Propaganda relesed to sway the opinion of the public
    Opposing forces strike, assume the other sides bluffin
    Until sombody finally pushes the button........BOOM
    Loud sounds followed by blast consume every home
    As suburban America becomes a nuclear war zone
    An active planet now a tomb, no one could escape
    Disrespect 4 humanity sealed humanity's fate

    word~perfect
    First it was religious percecution then seperation
    Europeans used running as a solution giving birth to a nation
    The united states confusion as history unfoiled we stole the soil!
    Bitting the hand that feeds eracing them in turmoil.
    Now People scream for retribution and revolution
    But we created this destiney…
    putting faith in false prophets disquised as political entities.
    It’s nonsence..Those deamed as enemies offer us more remedies
    Then our own leaders but power is a disease
    And the governments bottom feeders are infected
    our rights are no longer respected
    Abiding by law is expected if not we’re neglected.
    We ruined gods fasaud and molded him to our image
    But we were made from his.as the stories gained vintage
    We were taught minority beliefs were sac religious.
    We needed new ways to pay slave wage so we gave them welfare
    Created diseases for another ice age genocide
    and claimed it was chemical warfare.
    Diseases that attacks are cells and atoms.. atoms bombs
    That cause an apocolypse making hell rise from napalm.
    We seek what ever we can to blame it on… to remain calm
    Read your own palm… the blood of man is on your hands
    But its your own blood cause man does what he will understand?
    we clone the same mistakes we make
    put our faith in monitors but with no face
    just a push of the button and we are all eraced
    gone without a trace and replaced.
    we're born into sin as so it begins then it ends regardless resistance
    so it is we fear death but welcome it by inedverdly offering assistance.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    that was hot keep at it dawg

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    pretty original peace...i liked the whole sheme it made sence flowed n was a nice drop....... keep it real mane....

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    Damn word after I read ur verse I felt like rewriting my shit. Anywayl...uppin
    Last edited by Na~Ledge; February 26th, 2005 at 12:13 PM

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    Both nice pieces with a good subject. Good use of vocabulary and overall a good collaboration. The small points I can raise are that maybe a change in structure for both could benefit this. It would make it easier on the eye and easier to follow.

    Good work though... Sorry this is short but I couldn't find much to say...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173701

    Peace
    Last edited by Deviate; February 26th, 2005 at 01:29 PM
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    Really good,

    Both verses were creative and really carefully thought of. Structure from both coulda been better but that aint really important as long as it flows well, which this did 90% of the time.

    Overall this was really good with a good topic

    Keep droppin
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    Na~ledge You Outshown Me On Your Verse Never Second Guess Yourself Again.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    uppin this
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    lol at everybody sleepin on this... uppin

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    Yo

    You Come From A Whole Other Concept Of Rapping And That Shit Is Tight. I Respect You For Your Flows Because I Read Every Last One Of Your Posts And Each One Was Fresh And Different Fron Any Other Type Of Rapping. Good Luck For The Future
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    I'M FIRE- FUCK WHAT THE THUGS DESIRE

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    Thanks
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    yo whats good dis da same word perfect from Streetverbalz and Verbal Kombat...
    If so whats good its Prodical Emcee....
    If not whats good anyway....
    Good Peices tho Good Flow Kept me readin...Nice vocab

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    Both nice pieces with a good subject. Good use of vocabulary and overall a good collaboration. The small points I can raise are that maybe a change in structure for both could benefit this. It would make it easier on the eye and easier to follow.

    yep werd^^^

    keepin comin both emcee's

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