Genocide` V. Jayembee

[Jay Walker]

RULES FOR THE BATTLES-No hate votes, crew votes, or D/R votes
-No feeding whatsoever
-Anyone can vote UNLESS they are a member of one of the battlers' crew
-make sure to put "Battle for elite list spot" in the rules.
-Regular FL rules apply
-Due in an hour, tops. Its 8:00 eastern now.

...but for real, keep faggots like sinAmen and white dogg, and all your other praisers out, son.

G.L. my man.

[Jay Walker]

Check...btw, I made it 500 post to vote, so no herbs vote.

[Lay Doubt.]

my bad, forgot.

in.

[Jay Walker]

Shit, I forgot to say it in the poll, but this is an Elite spot battle...

[Lay Doubt.]

i'll send your elite status into an early retirement dude
and shit, even the poll shows that i'm higher than you
who you trying to fool?... in the end the wackest fall
i'll drop this J with ease n i ain't talkin about basketball
you ain't a match at all, dawg.. who you lying to G?
and flipping his concepts proves it's em Jay's trying to beE
i type lines with ease, and i'll leave this cat.. well, beat
you wanna keep your spot? then here's an L.... eat
yeah it's a swell feast, but don't be cheery too much
cuz while you may be on The Next Level..
...you've been stuck there for nearly a month

[Jay Walker]

To verses, you’ve felt hurt ya...called it an emergency, right?
Stop w/ the lies... it’s just another excuse for YOU to pre-write!
Fuck’a Geno-guy, this faggots ego’s high, it’s such a joke,
It may be played, but truth remains, most ya shit written...
... YOU never wrote!
Kids hope’s getting toasted, it’s clear you wrote for sinAmen,
Cause after that verse with Center...
..............dudes on your dick, in every thread you’ve been in
A sliltherin’ snake of men, u’re a bitch kid, its true my friend,
You dope? Everytime I see wack –TexT-, I thinking of you again!
U’re kidding...pretend, right? Tryna diss people for PMing Feebs?
When u’re the same faggot that got him to cover-up 1-2's sheets!!!

[Ike Ill.]

JayEmBee FUCK YOU

Whats your beef?

And how am I gonna vote when he's in my crew? you think im that dumb you fucking idiot?

[Jay Walker]

I dont have any beef with you...I dont even know you!

But what I do know, is you have been following Lay around, and I didnt want you in this thread, but it seems that failed. But for real, I dont have beef with you, so please refrain from freeposting, and junking this thread up. Thanks.

[Iniquitous.]

ill vote though

Geno:
who you trying to fool?... in the end the wackest fall
i'll drop this J with ease n i ain't talkin about basketball
you ain't a match at all, dawg.. who you lying to G?
and flipping his concepts proves it's em Jay's trying to beE
yeah it's a swell feast, but don't be cheery too much
cuz while you may be on The Next Level..
...you've been stuck there for nearly a month

vs.

Jay:
To verses, you’ve felt hurt ya...called it an emergency, right?
Stop w/ the lies... it’s just another excuse for YOU to pre-write!
Fuck’a Geno-guy, this faggots ego’s high, it’s such a joke,
It may be played, but truth remains, most ya shit written...
... YOU never wrote!
Kids hope’s getting toasted, it’s clear you wrote for sinAmen,
Cause after that verse with Center...
..............dudes on your dick, in every thread you’ve been in
U’re kidding...pretend, right? Tryna diss people for PMing Feebs?
When u’re the same faggot that got him to cover-up 1-2's sheets!!!

think this was a good close battle...I know Geno gonna bitch and cry but still gotta say Jay took this he just had more personals and an overall better verse....geno you dropped fire just jay dropped hotter fire not hate just stating the obvious

v. Jay

[Lay Doubt.]

..fake personals, yeah.

I'm honestly getting tired of the shit about me not writing my own verses. I have NEVER been wrote for.. not ONCE. I thought I'd clear that up right now. I don't pre-write, SinAmen coming into my threads isn't insulting me, all I did was have Feeble delete a vote that was FOR ME.. so I could change my punch to avoid the biting accusations.

Now go ahead and report me for swaying, I don't care.. just tired of cats thinking fake personals are good.. or even true, for that matter.

[Assazin]

Originally posted by:Lay Doubt
i'll send your elite status into an early retirement dude
and shit, even the poll shows that i'm higher than you
^^MEH ON THE OPENER...NOT TO WITTY
who you trying to fool?... in the end the wackest fall
i'll drop this J with ease n i ain't talkin about basketball
^^AIGHT USAGE OF NAMEPLAY....AND MET
you ain't a match at all, dawg.. who you lying to G?
and flipping his concepts proves it's em Jay's trying to beE
^^NICE
i type lines with ease, and i'll leave this cat.. well, beat
you wanna keep your spot? then here's an L.... eat
^^OK
yeah it's a swell feast, but don't be cheery too much
cuz while you may be on The Next Level..
...you've been stuck there for nearly a month
^^NICE CLOSER...OK PERSONAL....

I've seen you in better battles but you had some nice concept's in this
one.....some good shit here.......

Originally posted by:JayembeE
To verses, you’ve felt hurt ya...called it an emergency, right?
Stop w/ the lies... it’s just another excuse for YOU to pre-write!
^^MEH ON THE PERSONAL...AN OPENER COULD OF BEEN BETTER
Fuck’a Geno-guy, this faggots ego’s high, it’s such a joke,
It may be played, but truth remains, most ya shit written...
... YOU never wrote!
^^OK...BUT I DON'T LIKE HOW YOU DROPPED THE LAST LINE
DOWN.....NOT CLEAN AT ALL...
Kids hope’s getting toasted, it’s clear you wrote for sinAmen,
Cause after that verse with Center...
..............dudes on your dick, in every thread you’ve been in
^^NICE PERSONAL...
A sliltherin’ snake of men, u’re a bitch kid, its true my friend,
You dope? Everytime I see wack –TexT-, I thinking of you again!
^^A LIL ERROR...BUT IT'LL WORK....OK PERSONAL....
U’re kidding...pretend, right? Tryna diss people for PMing Feebs?
When u’re the same faggot that got him to cover-up 1-2's sheets!!!
^^NICE CLOSER......

you dropped some nice shit.......you've elevated a lot since we've
battled....had a lil error.....but other then that.....some good shit...

this one's a real close one.....but at the end of the bout'....it comes
down to JayembeE for having more personals. connected wit punches
that came out nice........good shit both though........

V/Jay
for having more personals....connected with punches...

hit the link back in the sig..wit an honest vote thanx much appreciated
pz...........

[Rule.]

i'll send your elite status into an early retirement dude
and shit, even the poll shows that i'm higher than you
- this is a really played concept.

who you trying to fool?... in the end the wackest fall
i'll drop this J with ease n i ain't talkin about basketball
- decent, seen this punch in so many different forms for people with J names though..

you ain't a match at all, dawg.. who you lying to G?
and flipping his concepts proves it's em Jay's trying to beE
- tried a little bit too hard here, imo.. and it came across forced.

i type lines with ease, and i'll leave this cat.. well, beat
you wanna keep your spot? then here's an L.... eat
- ehhh its alright

yeah it's a swell feast, but don't be cheery too much
cuz while you may be on The Next Level..
...you've been stuck there for nearly a month
- your best bar






To verses, you’ve felt hurt ya...called it an emergency, right?
Stop w/ the lies... it’s just another excuse for YOU to pre-write!
- nah

Fuck’a Geno-guy, this faggots ego’s high, it’s such a joke,
It may be played, but truth remains, most ya shit written...
... YOU never wrote!
- nope. not true to my knowledge.

Kids hope’s getting toasted, it’s clear you wrote for sinAmen,
Cause after that verse with Center...
..............dudes on your dick, in every thread you’ve been in
- this is simply a statement. it really is. where's the punch ? so what if he's on his dick? oh no. whoopy.. ya know?

A sliltherin’ snake of men, u’re a bitch kid, its true my friend,
You dope? Everytime I see wack –TexT-, I thinking of you again!
- seen so many text nameplays, but i liked this.

U’re kidding...pretend, right? Tryna diss people for PMing Feebs?
When u’re the same faggot that got him to cover-up 1-2's sheets!!!
- blah no


overall, i was pretty disappointed with this battle, mostly from geno's side. i expected him to come alot better than he did. however, i still see geno taking this.. i felt jay tried too hard or came up short on attempted personals.. some re-wording woulda greatly helped in places too. it was basically:

yeah it's a swell feast, but don't be cheery too much
cuz while you may be on The Next Level..
...you've been stuck there for nearly a month

vs

A sliltherin’ snake of men, u’re a bitch kid, its true my friend,
You dope? Everytime I see wack –TexT-, I thinking of you again!

.. and considering geno's was more original, and funny, im giving this to him. you also lost this jay with your controversial personals .. they gotta be dead on facts before using them ya know, otherwise it takes away from the punch, alot.

v/ geno

[Jail Break]

yo i give this one to JayembeE that line To verses, you’ve felt hurt ya...called it an emergency, right?
Stop w/ the lies... it’s just another excuse for YOU to pre-write! that was a great jump off

[Land Lord]

i'll send your elite status into an early retirement dude
and shit, even the poll shows that i'm higher than you

^nice, good 3 syllable multi. it was a good opener

who you trying to fool?... in the end the wackest fall
i'll drop this J with ease n i ain't talkin about basketball

this shit was nice, good humor. nice lines

you ain't a match at all, dawg.. who you lying to G?
and flipping his concepts proves it's em Jay's trying to beE

probably the best line had, and it hit hard

i type lines with ease, and i'll leave this cat.. well, beat
you wanna keep your spot? then here's an L.... eat
this was pretty funny, i liked it

yeah it's a swell feast, but don't be cheery too much
cuz while you may be on The Next Level..
...you've been stuck there for nearly a month

maybe if i was on this sight a lil longer, i would understand it a bit more, but i had nice flow

To verses, you’ve felt hurt ya...called it an emergency, right?
Stop w/ the lies... it’s just another excuse for YOU to pre-write!

cool, but it didnt exactly rhyme, i kinda did, but it kinda didnt, and its not opener material

Fuck’a Geno-guy, this faggots ego’s high, it’s such a joke,
It may be played, but truth remains, most ya shit written...
... YOU never wrote!
i didnt really like that one, it was kida stretched

Kids hope’s getting toasted, it’s clear you wrote for sinAmen,
Cause after that verse with Center...
..............dudes on your dick, in every thread you’ve been in
A sliltherin’ snake of men, u’re a bitch kid, its true my friend,
You dope? Everytime I see wack –TexT-, I thinking of you again!
U’re kidding...pretend, right? Tryna diss people for PMing Feebs?
When u’re the same faggot that got him to cover-up 1-2's sheets!!!

the rest of rhing was good, nice verse overall

but my vote go to genocide
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[Jay Walker]

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