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Thread: legend continues

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    legend continues

    why dudes wanna test the kid/
    don't they know get hung over the balcony like michael's kids/
    never slowing down gotta exceed the pace/
    and the watch full of bumbs like craig mack face/
    the chain sparkle like i got puffy shiny suit/
    and my teams the best like the 95 jordan crew/ (<--- the bulls)
    don't jump so get down boy/
    i stay gettin high off drugs like the whole damn cowboys/(dallas football)
    on the grind so the flows keep pickin up/
    to find a harder rapper then go dig biggie up/
    niggaz claim to get me but i ignore the rumors/
    or they be minus a heartbeat like eddie cain jr/
    so I don't want to let the gat spit/
    i put marbury under my wing to show him how to carry them nics/(Knicks ball)
    that boy r deezy is off the heezy/
    i squeeze till empty nigga please believe me/
    aint another nigga out can see this/
    so if you ain't talkin money i don't speak no english/
    but i focus on mine alone/
    cause it would be lest gangs if niggaz can hold they own/
    i ain't tryin to knock nobodys hustle/
    but in the world i tustled and survived the struggle/
    my flow hyped rap battles since i came/
    cause i sorta compare my flow to the dope game/
    i ain't talkin bout hustlin cause rhymin pays/
    the anticipation of my product got em fiendin for days/
    the hard white be the pen and the pipe be the book/
    one taste of the flow guaranteed to leave them hooked/

    holla back just a lil something i sat down and put together

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    Well it shows you're overrall trying to elevate, but it seems that your coming up with basic words and its quite obvious. I suggest reading some big words out the dictionary and learn definitions or if you already have, extend your vocabulary in your drops....I can see your trying to elevate and thats good..

    Keep dropping!

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    aight i feel you but i wonder what big words got to do wit makin it hott

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    uppin

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    "aint another nigga out can see this
    so if you ain't talkin money i don't speak no english"

    lol nice

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    It's good but yeah it could use a little work. It's a good start and it shows potential. You've clearly got the skill just add some more vocab to it and a few writing techniques. Keep writing man and I'll watch out for your stuff. Thanks for the feedback on "Trace".

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    aight my nigga good look

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    No matter how good you think a hyme is there is always room for improvement, as everyone else is saying man the vocab could use a little work and you do have potential

    keep droppin

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    aight

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    Yo dat was nice but i agree wiv pied piper (tryin to elevate).. yo but thats gud i might jus start posting my tings..lol

    keep it up!
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