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Thread: Mercury Fitteds

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    Ink Thesis
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    Mercury Fitteds (ft. Stuff'd Aminol)

    Mercury Fitteds (ft. Stuff'd Aminol)

    Ink Thesis & Stuff'd Aminol


    Ink Thesis

    A talent bleedin' beast, I get on stage, & see u leavin' G
    My mind's vision extends to a horizon my eyes can't even see
    Scar you with deep incisions, never in fear's condition
    Since my style formed the art of verbal imperialism
    From dusk 'till dawn kid, my state of mind remains haunted
    And I reached out for the top, then realized I was on it
    I can paint traits of knowledge & insane states
    In Rakim's brain waves...
    Like Al-Qaeda, until you get rid of me, the world ain't safe
    Quite young but dope dude, my mic stuns & chokes fools
    Flip that coin, & get ur eyes, mind, lungs 'n' throat bruised


    Stuff'd Aminol

    The threat worst ignored by mainstream media operatives
    Just call me holocaust in this optimist metropolis
    I'm locked in pits where mind wandering gargoyles and gobblins live
    Death be the penalty…
    You’re an execution activist with a name that topped the list
    Copy this roger screams and the industry copies that
    Fuck a dog eat dog society, you're a purring copy cat
    Arms detached, body smashed, rejoint with no limbs left
    The MILLION DOLLAR MAN whose makers never paid interest
    Skinheads in imposter costumes get their wigs pushed back
    Stare eye-open, thieving for a top ten spot while the crooks nap...


    (Chorus 2x)

    ...Shhhhh!...

    You'll wake the babies...
    Have em in need of a diaper changing if your cypher's crazy
    I just came here to write insanely with mixed emotions
    Lips open...
    The pen is potent when soaked in ink, in grips of the dope


    Ink Thesis

    Conquered the underground game, makin' the crowd faint
    Emerging thoughts with reality, I spit images with sound paint
    I kill with lightning, doubt that? Then just try me
    Dawg I'm sicker than Jenna Jameson doin' porn, in her nineties
    Inhaling flames to remain concious, my surroundings are burnin' grounds
    Bitch turn around...
    I've developed incision techniques surgeons wana learn about
    Ink always bombin' shit, as if my mind's equipped with hydrolics kid
    With a rhyme scheme harder to explain than Egyptian hieroglyphics
    When I'm around I'm wild, merk lists? I got piles that's filed
    And once Ink is gone, you rappers will be left without a style


    Stuff'd Aminol

    They laced necrophelia with white collar cult appeal
    Now former slaves kiss dead massa's on the dollar bill
    They expect your hype to last, I was sick and tired first
    All you feel is out of touch, it only gets on my nerves
    If storm breaks my speech, when weather dies, I live inside words
    Mimic mine to get tornadoes sent and die unheard
    I sport a blank fitted with insanity drenched in it
    Livin' madhatter passion, serving Lewis Carrol sentences
    Witnessed trailing white rabbits the blind labeled nothingness
    Victim to verdicts through queen of hearts biased stubbornness
    Imprisoned en route to wonderland with junk in the trunk...
    and a waist too big for bunny hole circumferences!
    ...I'm done with this


    (Chorus 2x)

    ...Shhhhh!...

    You'll wake the babies...
    Have em in need of a diaper changing if your cypher's crazy
    I just came here to write insanely with mixed emotions
    Lips open...
    The pen is potent when soaked in ink, in grips of the dope


    Peace
    Last edited by Ink Thesis; February 18th, 2005 at 02:41 AM

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    Man that was a good read. Havent been on-line in a long time so I been missing up some real lyricist. I dont know what lines to quote had a whole bunch there.
    Stuff'd Aminol, he got good lines too -
    "Fuck a dog eat dog society, you're a purring copy cat
    Arms detached, body smashed, rejoint with no limbs left
    The MILLION DOLLAR MAN whose makers never paid interest
    Skinheads in imposter costumes get their wigs pushed back
    Stare eye-open, thieving for a top ten spot while the crooks nap..."

    Lines of yours that really stood out
    "Emerging thoughts with reality, I spit images with sound paint"
    "Ink always bombin' shit, as if my mind's equipped with hydrolics kid
    With a rhyme scheme harder to explain than Egyptian hieroglyphics"

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    punches wernt there really but talent composing content and rhythm were so this is a hot peace
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    That was sick .. had really good rythm, and was "catchy" fer say ... but was lackin punch lines.. there were some lines that stood out ... but this caught my eye

    "They laced necrophelia with white collar cult appeal
    Now former slaves kiss dead massa's on the dollar bill
    They expect your hype to last, I was sick and tired first
    All you feel is out of touch, it only gets on my nerves
    If storm breaks my speech, when weather dies, I live inside words" <-- that was hott
    "Ignorant people are the bane of my existance" -myself

  6. #6
    Ink Thesis
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    appreciate the feedback...

    leave links and we'll hit 'em up...

    peace

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    I liked this piece, I'm not even quite sure why, I probably didn't even understand it properly. Good job both of you on this piece. I liked it, in many ways. I sort of caught on to those "punches" that were being made, not at eachother, but at other things. That may sound stupid but that's how Interperated it. They're seemed to bit of self-glorification in there too, but that's ok a little bit in my opinion is awsome. Even lots I like self glorification.

    This was a good drop, flow was on tact the whole time.

    props, if you could hit the link up my signature to either of my o.m's.

    Thanks, and props.

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    Quickfire piece, good multies, flow and vocab. I'll be honest, the concept sucked (don't fuck with us) but everything else was good. Kind of like No Mercy by Immortal Technique without the dope beat and vocab but as I said, good piece of work. You two worked well together on this bit.

    Nice hook (cept hush you'll wake the babes) too.

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    Bo needs a leash.

    "They laced necrophelia with white collar cult appeal
    Now former slaves kiss dead massa's on the dollar bill"

    Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.
    can I kick it?

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    sick thoughtz
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    nice

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    Ink Thesis
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    spoken, leave some proper fuckin feedback dude...

    lol..

    uppin'..

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    Ink Thesis
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    up..

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    Damn that was fucking ILL its probably the tightest collobaration verses on here.
    I couldnt hate on nothing in those verse structure was good vocab and flow was great.
    There was just so many sick lines in all your verses, that jenna jameson doing porn in her nineties line had me cracking up.

    OVERALL DOPE AS HELL.

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    damn this was dope. i liked many punchlines and the rhyme scheme was great. u 2 made a great collab and the vocab was exceptional. i liked the chorus a lot, cuz of it's poetry style like written in a stanza. i think ink stood out to me a bit more than stuff'd but u both came dope and impressed me a lot.
    maybe one day i can colab with one or both of u in an open mic.
    pz out.

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    Ink Thesis
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    thx alot, i appreciate the feedback..

    hit me up if any1 wants to collab.

    ink_thesis@hotmail.com

    peace

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