aiight 10 lines i'll hit first
Cin
kriminal_Intent
aiight 10 lines i'll hit first
yo, yo
im hittin hard like no other u talkin to the man
ur rhymes are so wack u jack them with ur hand
ur rhymes got no skill they easy like ur motha
u spit like 2 homo's always suckin each otha
i'll neva surrenda no matter how many times u strike
u can shoot me wit a gun but i can blast u wit a mike
u gunna be sorry ur dady's condom eva broke
cause while u chokin on ma smoke im rippin out ya fuckin throat
u fuck wit me again u’ll need parental consent
remember this name forever this is kriminal intent
IIght lets get this finished nigga
This bitch Kriminal Intention?You neva even had cruel intentions
Only crime you eva committed was thinkin ya name was a dope invention
Here's an open line...steal this...But you still wouldnt you're a girl scout
You came to RB offerin us milk n cookies...when we knew u were about...
Bakin ya self a batch of d/r's and sendin em thread to thread
Still feelin like a Bad Boy..well we all know it's failure you dread
You throw a fit lift up your dress and beg us to fist you
How about a punch right there...you want me to stick it through
You're a dick riding faggot confusing your name with other people's reality
You've been caught..you saw my name and confused spelling and mentality
*done*
Uppin this vote now........................................
Upp......
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
This bitch Kriminal Intention?You neva even had cruel intentions
Only crime you eva committed was thinkin ya name was a dope invention
Here's an open line...steal this...But you still wouldnt you're a girl scout
You came to RB offerin us milk n cookies...when we knew u were about...
sry to say but these 4 lines destryoed his opponents verse.....so u win CIN, later doggs, nice flo both y'all but punches were won by CIN.
V/CIN the man lol!!!! hit my battles both of y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I think your verses were weak ... but i have to go with cin cause he dissed you harder
Originally posted by:Kriminal Intent
im hittin hard like no other u talkin to the man
ur rhymes are so wack u jack them with ur hand
ur rhymes got no skill they easy like ur motha
u spit like 2 homo's always suckin each otha
i'll neva surrenda no matter how many times u strike
u can shoot me wit a gun but i can blast u wit a mike
u gunna be sorry ur dady's condom eva broke
cause while u chokin on ma smoke im rippin out ya fuckin throat
u fuck wit me again u’ll need parental consent
remember this name forever this is kriminal intent
^^YOU WERE TALKIN TO MUCH ABOUT....POINTLESS SHIT....YOU HAD
NO REAL PUNCHES...NO REAL DISSES.....NO REAL PERSONALS.......ASWELL
YOU NEED TO WORK ON A LOT OF SHIT.......BEFORE YOU TRY BATTLING
OTHER KAT'S THAT ARE NICER THEN YOU..........ELEVATE.....PZ.........
Originally posted by:Cin
This bitch Kriminal Intention?You neva even had cruel intentions
Only crime you eva committed was thinkin ya name was a dope invention
Here's an open line...steal this...But you still wouldnt you're a girl scout
You came to RB offerin us milk n cookies...when we knew u were about...
Bakin ya self a batch of d/r's and sendin em thread to thread
Still feelin like a Bad Boy..well we all know it's failure you dread
You throw a fit lift up your dress and beg us to fist you
How about a punch right there...you want me to stick it through
You're a dick riding faggot confusing your name with other people's reality
You've been caught..you saw my name and confused spelling and mentality
^^YOU TOOK THIS FOR HAVING CREATIVITY......PUNCHES......
AND A LIL USAGE OF NAMEPLAY....WHICH WAS DIRECTLY TOWARD'S HIM
YOU PUT FORTH EFFORT.......SO YOU EASILY TOOK THIS........
V/Cin
for throwing punches.........disses........and everything........else..
LOL @ this battle... Merkage.
kriminal_intent - ....Heh, I guess you had good concepts... Just try to express them better. Yoiur need to work on a larger structure, your own style and maybe explain better... As for your humor rating, you need to elevate with your words first son.. The rymes were alright... Just a wack verse.. okay for a novice... Keep battling.
Cin - You've elevated yo.. Your punches stood out, your style was good, your structure was well-er than usuall..... Nice job man I liked your second line... Word @ White Dogg... Good battle..
v/ - Cin.
Kriminal - Very basic verse. Your rhymes were all very elementary, work on elevating and using more complex concepts. For example use metaphors, similies, and words with double meaning to punch your opponent. Your shit was wack.
Cin - Aight - None of your punches really landed but anything was better than the shit he put up. Work on making your punches hit...like most of your stuff was statements. When you read the last word you should say OUCH after it.. if you don't it's prolly not a great punch. Just work on that and you'll be fine.
Vote - Cin
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