Hey there!

It looks like you're enjoying Rap Battles Forum but haven't created an account yet. Why not take a minute to register for your own free account now? As a member you get free access to all of our forums and posts plus the ability to post your own messages, communicate directly with other members and much more. Register now!

Already a member? Login at the top of this page to stop seeing this message.

User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: ain't no title just call it the bible

  1. #1
    Newbie heartless creep's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Location
    upstate ny
    Age
    39
    Posts
    46

    ain't no title just call it the bible

    do you wanna see me rap my ass off, shove a piece of grass up there and cough, i don't know how you do it, this is how i shit, anal seapege is a thing of the past, its sort of like a thing that goes blast, i'm not worried with tears, i'm worried with fears, what if it goes wrong, what if the doc is wrong, what if i can't smoke my bong, damn this is too long,
    dont ask me what it's about, i have no clue i'm just spitting it out, like a freestlye killer who never watched thriller, i found a hooker down the street, she said she likes to be beat, so i smack her ass a little more often, next thing i knew she was feeling my big ten, had no clue how i got here, maybe the drugs had an effect on me, my mind turned to mush next time you see me i'll be shaving a bush,

  2. #2
    Fear Before The March Foreshadow's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2004
    Location
    Portland, Oregon
    Posts
    3,107
    Battle Record
    8-8
    Flow was crap and I'm not feeling this at all. You had bad structure and you seem to be a follower or you dont know how to be creartive and not post the same thing everyone else is posting.

  3. #3
    Newbie heartless creep's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Location
    upstate ny
    Age
    39
    Posts
    46
    i agree with you 100 percent. i'm not a very good rapper and i shouldn't choose it as a profession, hopefully one day i'll be good enough and actually create a flow that everyone will enjoy.

  4. #4
    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2003
    Location
    Houston, Texas
    Age
    39
    Posts
    5,316
    Battle Record
    15-10
    all i can say is elevate on every aspect of flowing.~1~


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.



    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.


  5. #5
    Banned
    Join Date
    Aug 2003
    Location
    Mifflinburg, PA
    Posts
    6,693
    Battle Record
    12-1
    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

  6. #6
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Age
    35
    Posts
    451
    Battle Record
    1-1
    too basic... your structure was bad, flow was bad.. as they said, your lacking pretty much every category in text.. but we all started as that, so keep writing and you'll elevate in time.. work on your structure, flow, multis, ect. Keep it up!

  7. #7
    Dune Methane CrazyCarl's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Age
    37
    Posts
    1,866
    Battle Record
    3-0
    Work on your topic, write about something you've established not random lines in a freestyle. Work up to posting your freestyles, practice with writtens first, and you'll get better.

  8. #8
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Posts
    197
    Battle Record
    2-12
    Work on your vocab and wordplay it will make ya flow sound betta use rhymes with more than one syllable it makes your piece more complex no one likes reading cat hat bat sat. But for a newbee it was alright just elevate and keep spitting and eventually you will get there

Similar Threads

  1. According to the Bible..
    By Ryan in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 140
    Last Post: May 22nd, 2011, 11:26 AM
  2. Ain't come up with a title yet
    By HadouKing in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: June 10th, 2010, 10:42 PM
  3. New Call of Duty Title Announced
    By Menace II Society in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 31
    Last Post: March 5th, 2010, 11:20 AM
  4. The Bible
    By Zed Peace in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 68
    Last Post: March 2nd, 2008, 08:08 PM
  5. My Bible
    By absolutezero in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: March 21st, 2004, 04:23 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •