Fuck'a Celestial

[Derive]

Meh, took me a good 2 mins to key this. I havnt actually keyed a battle verse in a long time since ive just been into 1-2, so this is a freestyle/keystyle, word. And yes, this belongs here, yo.

NOTE: CELESTIAL DONT RESPOND TO THIS THREAD WITH ANY PIECE OF SHIT COMEBACK YOU MAY HAVE. THIS ISNT THE THREAD FOR YOU TO DO THAT, MAKE YOUR OWN THREAD AND STAY THE FUCK OUT OF MINE.

supathug818: so what happened
supathug818: celes cried to u?
supathug818: how cute.
ILLunatic1: yup

Born, give me Derive next week

Independent? My ass, kid would need help writing his own will,
And i dont want to make you cry again..............................
..................or you might run back to Illunatic or Born to Kill!
This whack fuck got no skill, to him everythings complex,
I mean, he still gets lost on where to stick it......................
.................................................. ...while having oral sex!
Its perplex how these objects are annex, this kid has a plaque,
Because ive just confused him 4 times...............................
........................................and already hes begun to crack
Hes whack, hes a slack, this kids rhymes dont connect
Because even the mirror cant reflect the whackness that you reflect,
In your rhymes, its a crime, that this kid hasnt been withdrawn
But hey, its ok!, sooner or later you'll be foregone.

[Derive]

Didnt let me edit for some reason, i guess my IE is laggy, so....

Links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161425
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162963

[Cels]

my god.. still beefing over that 1-2 punch battle a year ago that you had with this kid i talked to

wow

Ok first of all.. is this 1 point font really needed.. it wont change the syllable count in your lines

Independent? My ass, kid would need help writing his own will,
And i dont want to make you cry again..............................
..................or you might run back to Illunatic or Born to Kill!
Wtf? I barely talk to Born To Kill, only have maybe 5 times in my whole stay at RB, and blah @ illunatic.. not sure when you made me cry either
This whack fuck got no skill, to him everythings complex,
I mean, he still gets lost on where to stick it......................
.................................................. ...while having oral sex!
you didnt just just make a sex punch.. omg, you did
Its perplex how these objects are annex, this kid has a plaque,
Because ive just confused him 4 times...............................
........................................and already hes begun to crack
Meh
Hes whack, hes a slack, this kids rhymes dont connect
Because even the mirror cant reflect the whackness that you reflect,
A mirror line.. even worse then an oral sex line
In your rhymes, its a crime, that this kid hasnt been withdrawn
But hey, its ok!, sooner or later you'll be foregone.


And for your information, only reason I decided to respond is because i was linked here, and have nothing better to do at the moment really.. figure I give freeposting in EI a break

*waits till i beat you in 1-2 and you start more beef*

Edit: lol..

SocCantStayStill: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...70#post1945670
SocCantStayStill: fight fight ifght!
The Celestial 01: lol
The Celestial 01: *peeps*
SocCantStayStill: its whack

[Derive]

Read the first sentence i posted, i keyed this in 2 mins, not like i tried, i was bored. Soc can talk shit all he wants, but i got his ass this week in the 1-2, so i wont say anything until the battles over. Anyways, i was bored as fuck, and had nothing better to do. I threw in some nifty wordplay, some nice punches, and tied it all together. My setups match the punches and so on. Meh, look on the bright side, i wasnt bored for a whole 2 minutes .

[Cels]

that is the only post I have ever seen made by you responding to something I said were you didn't beef with me

*claps*

[Derive]

Fuck is this a soap opera? I think this is the part where everyone tunes out and all the old people stay and watch the sappy crap. Weeeeee, fun, I should do these more often.

[Cels]

lol @ this getting no replies

[Jai-Cee]

So does this go any further... or have you two just squashed the beef...?

Nice-ish battle verse... Some ok punches - dunno bout the personals much as its about a subject (Cel supposedly crying) that I have no idea about...

Cel - you going to carry this on...?
Derive - is that your lot...?

[Iniquitous.]

yall should battle take it to the FL

[Awaken]

I love watching beef rise, or fall, whichever level this is at.
But yo, internet beef is important these days. It's cool.

[Vylint]

compared to the calibur of disses in here lately


refrain from posting in times of crew beef it took away from your magnitude

[$pitacular]

word this actually may have hurt you instead of celes.... hopefully he doesnt destroy you...

but change your font, and make your rhyme scheme more complex... the personal touch was good, keep that... and keep at it.

pz

[lyrically_insane]

yo you know how MODS are always sayin.....take that shit to FL.....now its time for yall nikkas to take that shit to FL!!!

[Swift Death]

well its about as dope as you are derive...

not very.

[Lil Cap0ne]

battle i want to see you 2 battle!!