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Thread: Just Ain't Dope (My Style)

  1. February 15th, 2005, 09:02 PM #1
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    Just Ain't Dope (My Style)

    Just Ain't Dope (My Style)
    Written By: ELEETE

    My scriptures are written lyrics that'll burn the gimmicks...
    When you hear it I'll turn your image like your words dimished...
    My soul yurns to comform an reform the rhythmic...
    Your turn is finished, should've known I cant be learned or mimicked...
    Like a mystic magician, my wizadry cripples all competittion...
    I'm like Jesus on a mission to bring you all of god's religions...
    I would open your mind, If my lyrics could cut like an incision...
    I'm divine in sight so I can see truth through the lies in vision...
    Even though emcees say I just aint dope enough...
    No hope for luck, the road I chose at the fork is rough...
    I got kids callin me out like "ELEETE your flow just sucks"...
    Shit makes me want to choke my throat till my vocals erupt...
    Check my expression when pressure is pressed against me...
    You attempt to tempt me but the gauges have measured empty...
    I'm in school with kids, like an adult trapped in elementary...
    This is the documentary of a an emcee whos words are alimentary...
    But now sadness absorbs my status, im comformed in madness...
    Thoughts are morbid, tragic, my soul's been scorched to ashes...
    Body stored in blackness, these visions are horrid lapses...
    Playing in my head...torturous sights of corpse in masses...
    I just wanted you to feel the nostalgic spirit resident thats evident...
    A style so intelligent, its apparent, wack shit here is irrelevent...
    Evidence shows perfection when combining the elements...
    It takes dedication, development of a mind beyond intelligence...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171361
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170442
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  2. February 15th, 2005, 09:21 PM #2
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    yo twin this was ill shit you know i peep content so i cant really do the rest but he content was fire twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  3. February 15th, 2005, 09:26 PM #3
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    This is wicked shit it had a nice flow keep droppin.

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  4. February 15th, 2005, 09:27 PM #4
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    hit me for collab whenever you want
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  5. February 15th, 2005, 09:29 PM #5
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    Wow... I really liked this.
    I liekd the words you used, and the presentation of the concept.
    Good vocab.
    You really just pulled it off here, man.
    Good job.
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  6. February 15th, 2005, 09:38 PM #6
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    yo i liked that, lotta emotion in that man, ill piece, lookin forward to another one
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  7. February 15th, 2005, 10:22 PM #7
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    nice dawg i felt the emotion
    and good vocab yoo
    kepp it up

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  8. February 16th, 2005, 12:08 AM #8
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    Was a good drop... you had a nice structured flow, wordplay was there... multis were there as well, nothin was basic, it was nice and complex... you also had good vocab in this.. but overal, this was a good drop.. keep it up!
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  9. February 16th, 2005, 12:15 AM #9
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    Word.

    Fa Realz....One of the best I've seen in a while Keep It NYCE....
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  10. February 16th, 2005, 01:18 PM #10
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    Yo appreciate the feedback...leave a link ill hit you up...

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  11. February 16th, 2005, 01:23 PM #11
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    Yeah, this was actually pretty good. I see a lot of kid's forcing multis and using words out of context, but I didn't see this happen with your verse. Your emotion was good and your vocabulary was very good also.. the flow was really nice and overall, this piece kept me entertained. I could easily see this being lengthened and converted into audio. I also liked the simple message behind this piece. My favorite lines are as follows:


    But now sadness absorbs my status, im comformed in madness...
    Thoughts are morbid, tragic, my soul's been scorched to ashes...
    Body stored in blackness, these visions are horrid lapses...
    Playing in my head...torturous sights of corpse in masses...

    those were just nice, straight up. ^

    and these were good also...

    Even though emcees say I just aint dope enough...
    No hope for luck, the road I chose at the fork is rough...
    I got kids callin me out like "ELEETE your flow just sucks"...
    Shit makes me want to choke my throat till my vocals erupt...
    Check my expression when pressure is pressed against me...
    You attempt to tempt me but the gauges have measured empty...


    Overall, this drop was really solid and above average.. keep dropping cuz I like your style.

    Aiyo, return the favor please and drop feedback on this OM Diss with $pit, Feeble and myself. Thanks in advance, peace.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171404
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  12. February 16th, 2005, 01:26 PM #12
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    by the way, the picture of that chick in your signature.. the one on the right... daaaaaaaaaamn, she's fine as fuck yo. Look at those lips, who is that? lol.
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  13. February 16th, 2005, 01:33 PM #13
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    well, first thing thats striked me was the flow
    and the brilliant use of internals. Was really
    smooth and i could imagine it being spit out
    over a beat. Good bar length as well. You
    had some nice vocab in there, came strong.
    You kept it complex but then again, not too
    hard to follow or understand. Message & content
    was good, all relevant, didnt stray or go off to
    another topic...dope.

    Overall, it was nice, a good read, again the flow
    was what really captivated me...4/5...!

    Return the favour:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171441
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  14. February 16th, 2005, 02:38 PM #14
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    Damn this was a nice piece. I was feeling this all the way throught. the flow was just amazing and i loved it. The story was real nice as well it went wioth the rhyme or whatever it was real nice.
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  15. February 16th, 2005, 08:59 PM #15
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    ill shit man,nice vocab,tight multisyour style is ill,all in all this was an ill drop,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

    hit me up if you wanna do a clooab.


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