Vapour v MD Device

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[MD Device]

czech czechity checcckity chevkckehckvhekhckchv

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calm it kiddo lol

check.

ill drop tomorrow cus im going offline in like 10 minutes

[MD Device]

fuck with me and your fucking with a psycho, ill take your life/
cause your bodies breakable like it was made by tyco or fischer price/
ya fuckin toy, you'd prolly be more comforatable in a skimpy unitard wonderboy/
more like wonder girl/
quit chokin on nuts, you aint a motherfuckin squirrel/
your antics make me wanna hurl your just so sheisty/
and my blood runs icy/
still people ask for my advice even though its pricy/
just call me DR DEVICE and ill call you wifey/
dont be surprised im not notorious for my piety/
i dont see why your tryin to fight me/
you'd me more successful trying to make another remix of white tee/
featuring whitey ... ... ford you've got as much rap skill/
as a two by four wood bord/
and im the hood lord/
and i wont be ignored/

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got back before i expected ....

jsut something quick .....

The kids a newb so he probably thinks im gonna half spit,
Ok I will, you’ll get more laughs … about your attempted whit,
In your battle with XeNtRiK you want him to drop before you,

you go first xentrik
Lets see what this mans got

Whats the reason for this? Oh I know its cus you aint got a clue,
Device can’t think up good punches, ever … got permanent block,
Read the rules then cried and told his boyfriends to get off his cock,
Hes come into the deep end cus this is his 1st battle,
Its also gonna be his last, he realised he was wack … farewell.

NOW VOTE !

[MD Device]

yo someone vote on this

[MD Device]

reup

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uppin ................

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[Ndustrial Minded]

:S
a very weak battle on both sides...thought both of you should come a lot harder

MD - your lines didn't rhyme some of the time....an i wasn't feelin your verse too much.....come harder....hit with harder punches....

vapour - you can do too much betta bro...damn i don't think i've ever seen you drop so terrbily....but come a lot harder next time...hit with more punches....get a good flow an structure goin....

vote - MD for not comin so weak....

[MD Device]

yo when you read this you cant read it like dr seuss you gotta read it like a rap verse, ebonics and the hip-hop voice make things that might not appear to rhyme rhyme... you should know that by now

[MD Device]

u u p

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uppin ...........

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[Assazin]

Originally posted by:MD Device
fuck with me and your fucking with a psycho, ill take your life/
cause your bodies breakable like it was made by tyco or fischer price/
ya fuckin toy, you'd prolly be more comforatable in a skimpy unitard wonderboy/
more like wonder girl/
quit chokin on nuts, you aint a motherfuckin squirrel/
your antics make me wanna hurl your just so sheisty/
and my blood runs icy/
still people ask for my advice even though its pricy/
just call me DR DEVICE and ill call you wifey/
dont be surprised im not notorious for my piety/
i dont see why your tryin to fight me/
you'd me more successful trying to make another remix of white tee/
featuring whitey ... ... ford you've got as much rap skill/
as a two by four wood bord/
and im the hood lord/
and i wont be ignored/
^^YOU HAD NO REAL PUNCHES........DISSES....OR PERSONALS......
THAT I COULD OF SCOPED OUT.....YA STRUCTURE WAS DEFINATELY
GARBAGE.......YOU NEED TO SERIOUSLY WORK ON THAT FOR REAL
YOU WOULD HAVE A STRETCHED LINE...AND THEN USE SMALL TALK
YOU REALLY NEED TO STEP IT UP.....BEFORE YOU BATTLE ANYMORE..
PZ.............ELEVATE..............

Originally posted by:Vapour
The kids a newb so he probably thinks im gonna half spit,
Ok I will, you’ll get more laughs … about your attempted whit,
^^NICE..COMPARED TO HIS OPENER
In your battle with XeNtRiK you want him to drop before you,
Quote:
Originally Posted by MD Device
you go first xentrik
Lets see what this mans got
Whats the reason for this? Oh I know its cus you aint got a clue,
^^AIGHT PERSONAL
Device can’t think up good punches, ever … got permanent block,
Read the rules then cried and told his boyfriends to get off his cock,
^^MEH
Hes come into the deep end cus this is his 1st battle,
Its also gonna be his last, he realised he was wack … farewell.
^^MEH ON THE CLOSER............

you some ok personals........in your verse....but still......need to
work on your punches.........and multi's......ya structure smashed
his whole verse.......you could of just wrote a story about yourself
for the day..and made it look nice and you would a won.........pz......

V/Vapour
for comin way more harder then other.......kat............

P.S.S.S.S.S...Ndustrial that was the biggest D/R I've ever seen if there
was one...............pz.............out...........

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uppin .........
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Stop sleepin on this shit