penmenship verse 3 transfered from notebad text

[noncentz]

WElcome to tha land
By Murda 216 1 2 1 Minute Ago
by WORD~PERFECT
If mah name was in yo mouth.. this is for you ( 1 2 3 )
By Center Sight 11 56 1 Minute Ago
by WORD~PERFECT
hook: you need to check your penmanship
signing a contract dont gaurentee you memebership
or hip hop fellowship....
on the average your either recycled your garbage
so takes your 5 cents in cash or get back in the trash.
this the comeback where real rap and wack clash
real emcees is the new wave making a splash
like noahs arch for the half heart...
fo the real this the first strike to take back the art.

your fucken illiterate like a retard getting intimate with a penthouce
your only mic is an internate mouse....anything your mouth will use
i can reverse on you with a punchline and get hit for spousal abuse.
NONCENTZ got the juice! or atleast a koolaid smile want to be 8 miles
cant freestyle but profile while im out of this world like my birth certificate is on "x files"
your dumb and full of cum like propalactic textiles for pedefiles
fake thug if you a soldier then your gomer pile.
rip you in a moment strip your components opponents
be left flabergasted sonned by a bastard father makes sence dont it?
if it didnt then you got the point but insteade if it did then im dissapointed
i may bless emcees but even your fan base switch faith in the face of the annointed.
every a to b side be double jointed with repertetive hits conjointed.
your gonna need more than hemroid ointment to avoid
the pain of a steriod enduced kick in the ass
boy i'll be over joyed to do it ....most of you have me so anoid
that when i blackout i create a~void and can't avoid flowing till your whole genre destroyed.
molesting these bad~boys remixing PUFFY in a rap
run up on the label and stab each member dismembered like "TAKE THAT TAKE THAT"
remain in my own demension ranked above anyone in contension
crush you with the rhyme tension when you lines are limp and synthetic like a milli vanilli extension.
there is no chance for retension my style switches enough to fuck up an impalas suspencion
spit dimes from old to new school like i was in starten kindergarten collecting a pention.
it aint your comprehension im really raping the topic
but since its "fucking you " i guess im fallowing its chronologic logic
im agnostic and cant be broken down with human anatomy diagnostics.
(dude you lost it) hell nah i never had it it was just a habit
addicted to leave emcees inflicted and juristicted
to the home i houce them in and leave they collar bone shifted
from bobing they heads like they was giving me a blow job
damn i shouldnt use porn samples or angles to get the point across to these slobs.
but fuck it i say what i say these guys aint even commercial
they only a stunt double for a rehearsel for an infermercial filmed by unniversal.

hook: you need to check your penmanship
signing a contract dont gaurentee you memebership
or hip hop fellowship....
on the average your either recycled your garbage
so takes your 5 cents in cash or get back in the trash.
this the comeback where real rap and wack clash
real emcees is the new wave making a splash
like noahs arch for the half heart...
fo the real this the first strike to take back the art.

[noncentz]

uppin

[noncentz]

uppin

FUCK THIS IS GOING TO BE LIKE PART 2 BEING SLEPT ON

[Kill.]

Well i didnt like this one as good as the second one but this was still a great peice.....i like your unique style..................i mos deff. wanna hear this on audio if that is possible..................this seemed to have a couple of stretched lines but that was hardly noticable.....................so this is the end of the the song............it seems to be really long maybe you should shorten it but then again if its audio it might only be like a five minute song...........being to long as a whole song is the only thing i see as a possible flaw in this other then that it was a nice read...............

Hit this please
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170515

[noncentz]

it is 4 min 30 seconds the verses are designed to format tonedeffs style

[Kill.]

^^oh then this peice is fine i cant find anything wrong with it now.......i thought it might be too long but four minutes and thirty seconds is the length of an average song so the whole peice is just fine.......are you gonna put on audio for people on this site to hear or just on a cd of yours and is it already recorded?

[noncentz]

it isnt recorded yet but i have the beat cleared and lyrics copywritten and i would like to put here hopefully

[sILLable]

ill piece, nice vocab and massive complexity, tight punches, nice wordplay. good structure, it was long but it was tight to read never the less, tight ,ultis,all in all i liked this piece alot,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

[noncentz]

thanks alot diverse seriously

[WhiteNoise]

yo i thought this one was ok.........it had ok structure.......lacked a lil vocab......but other than that i thought it flowed really well...........the rhyme was good.......i got a good vibe from this piece........keep spittin......

[noncentz]

word thanks

[noncentz]

uppin

[noncentz]

Uppin

[LyricallAce]

Yo word what u should do.... Is not stretch ya lines

I didnt even read the whole script

but since it was so long i would make it in to like 3 verses for ya self.
Then i would consider it a real song.

Or people are just gonna cop that and ad a verse or two with it and use it for them selves.

(that happened to me.)

[noncentz]

Yo word what u should do.... Is not stretch ya lines

I didnt even read the whole script

but since it was so long i would make it in to like 3 verses for ya self.
Then i would consider it a real song.

Or people are just gonna cop that and ad a verse or two with it and use it for them selves.

(that happened to me.)

this mis the third verse there are 2 more and they only a minute long which is perfect for a verse you didnt read this obvious cause the content blends well and bars are not stretched they link