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  1. February 11th, 2005, 11:05 AM #1
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    Couple Of Punches

    your my enemy so i'll have to leave you dead on your brother
    i'll scare you shitless like waking up to find you getting head from your mother
    my flow is sick and im way past cold
    i irritate mc's more than the hair on their asshole
    mention my name and your torn scars will stay
    your rhymes are about as usefull as a porn star with aids
    I cant help it im a thug so it seems im bound for lone bids
    but my rhymes are more dangerous than jacko around his own kids
    dont be down hearted and depressed cause im an iller cat
    im real, your an imitation of a great like guerilla black
    beef with me you'll never even get close to caution
    i'll leave your soul more shattered than a bitches post abortion.
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  2. February 11th, 2005, 11:34 AM #2
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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  3. February 11th, 2005, 11:53 AM #3
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  4. February 11th, 2005, 11:57 AM #4
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    be an aight battle verse. started off pretty cool but slacked towards the end.

    some funnii punches tho enjoi'd it.

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  5. February 11th, 2005, 12:10 PM #5
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    the jacko line was funny and the head from mom shit was creepy man
    wasnt too bad, but ya stuff is kinda out dated homie



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  6. February 11th, 2005, 12:43 PM #6
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    Nice.. a few weak ones but the last two bars were real nice.

    The abortion line was an oooooooooooooooo ending.. hard shit.. great way to finish.
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  7. February 11th, 2005, 01:45 PM #7
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    yo dog that shit was kicking keep it up
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  8. February 11th, 2005, 01:47 PM #8
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    This shit was tight. My kind of flow, don't listen to the haters man this is what real rap should be about.
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  9. February 11th, 2005, 02:31 PM #9
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    This woulda been a pretty good battle verse.......you had a few real good punchlines in this and some pretty nice concepts...........nice overall...........only real thing wrong with it that i saw was the second line....it was a lil stretched but that was the only thing bad about it.............nice punches
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  10. February 12th, 2005, 10:56 AM #10
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    Appreciate the feed it was just a few punches i had scatter around so i just put em together, the jacko abortion and head from ya mother lines i think were dope but the rest were average.
    Id appreciate just a bit more feed.
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  11. February 12th, 2005, 01:25 PM #11
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    i liked it your flow was good i liked the punches and the metaphors the last line about the abortion was well played all in all good verse homie
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  12. February 12th, 2005, 04:14 PM #12
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    yo this would have been a good battle verse............lacked some things..........u started off pretty strong.....then fadded at the end.........u need to start strong and end strong.........the ending is a big part of ur verse.....but other than that nice drop.........keep spittin.......
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  13. February 13th, 2005, 12:05 PM #13
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  14. February 14th, 2005, 07:37 AM #14
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    To be honest, I didnt like it. Most the punches didnt connect properly, they were fairly basic. The flow was there, multis and a steady rhyme scheme werent - which let it down. The lines seemed too generic, if you're battling - Go for the throat. Diss your opponent directly, dont just come at him with "I'll do this to you, i'll do that" It gets repetitive. Needs work, but you'll pick it up eventually.

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  15. February 14th, 2005, 08:32 AM #15
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    I liked it, it was like a surprise thing every line

    You would like say im tight and blah blah, then say they sucked off by mom
    Nice, u should battle with that concept
    i would give it a 7/10
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