Good morning, America.

[Richard Parker]

I used to trace the stars & try to face their meaning
and beaming I'd embrace America's arms & wake up dreaming..
or maybe wake up screaming.. trying to face the fear
thinking how the fuck did I ever even make it here??
but my blatant cheer used to take me near to help arriving
it turned up as a white van, i went to the health asylum
for alcoholism; but look here. i wasn't one truthfully
but I'd no longer let them chuckle at what i used to be..
I made a name for myself.. & exclaimed that it helped
I was my own genie, made my way to fame & to wealth
my aim was of stealth, always striving for saving face
the history books will forever have my name in place..
erased the chains of slaves, but i deny their voice
try 'n fight this? dammit im the peoples guy of choice
I've risen taxes with hidden backfees, kiddin, ask me
driving catholicism into minds, the religion taxi ..
Those are my guns n weapons, have em done with steppin
i havent met a country who'll come for seconds
mash hoes, grab votes, but never from black folks
you saw the dollars.. Thats how the cash flows..
corruption, its nothing, compared to reagen
I'll have the aid in Iraq before Blaire is beggin..
dont care for paigans, poor get poorer & rich get richer
they must be better people, i stole that shit from hitler
Ive started wars & parted sorts from market soars
gathered up stats & rather get that than charts that bore
fought the whores to make sure I amend their ways
To other countries, packages aren't what I send away
lets just vent to say that the draft tops the list,
and I stop to bitch at inferiors who chop at this

so for ME..my second term'll be an accomplishment..

[Richard Parker]

all anybody wants to hear from me is disses now. lol

[spokenoh]

Booked.

[Richard Parker]

[Deon]

this was ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooook, good piece actually, flow was nice throughout this, loved the content actually.

my aim was of stealth, always striving for saving face
the history books will forever have my name in place..
erased the chains of slaves, but i deny their voice
try 'n fight this? dammit im the peoples guy of choice
I've risen taxes with hidden backfees, kiddin, ask me
driving catholicism into minds, the religion taxi ..
Those are my guns n weapons, have em done with steppin
i havent met a country who'll come for seconds

nice shit here sir

peep my piece and reply next.

[spokenoh]

I like Bush, actually. But then again, I am only a lowly Canadian.

Your flow at a point in this fell off a tad, just needed an extra syllable or two. The internals, and multi syllabelic flow was used well for a topical, and you had good imagery. Overall, this was pretty well-written, nothing else to say. Keep doing what you're doing. Peace.