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Thread: U Know not, doubt me

  1. #1

    U Know not, doubt me

    lower your inhibition, smoke cause i'm on a mission/
    dead soon as you turn the ignition, motive and i'm not just wishin/
    i'm gonna take you for what you got, sell it even tho its hot/
    make money and buy that pot, i'm talkin but you know not/
    have nothing but will get alot, get in my way and you'll get shot/
    so what the fuck am i goin on about as i sit here in doubt
    i'm growin tired of these days that pass me by
    workin a dead end job that pays but look into my eye
    i ain't made to to take this bullshit n keep my mouth shut
    keep on talkin bitch and u gon get you throat cut
    a violent mother fucker but forced to hold back
    this anger but know that i'm quick to react
    and if you cross the line than you ain't gonna get no slack
    patient and calm but push and i'll push back
    swing at me and be sure to connect
    or i'll stick you with this blade n be sure to hit the neck
    weed is the only thing that keeps me calm
    blunt in my mouth and a bowl in my palm
    getting high on this fire is my one and only desire
    then and only then can I sit back and admire
    naw just sit back and laugh at fake G's on thier daily grind
    cause i'm waitin for the day, someone crosses the line when I'm faded
    by this weed from the bay, cause I'm the Asian sensation
    and high is how I stay, I'm being patient so I sit back and blaze shit
    i wasted shit as soon as that voice gets raised, cause i ain't afraid to spray this AK
    cause if I do that means I keep gettin paid I'm a crazy creation no alcohol
    I ain't made to get washed just face it, i'm on this weed shit
    Now light that blunt bitch cause you look suspish got me askin
    are you down or out, is what i'm tryin to figure out
    you say your down, but then what's this yellin all about
    disrespect me as you sit on my couch
    you got alot to say but theres no need to shout
    fuck it i'll let you finish cause you'll crumble like grout
    weak as I punch a pussy mother fucker in his mouth
    the bitch gon fall straight down south and hit the ground
    n I ain't gonna hear nothing but the sound of sweet victory
    how tough is he, makin all the god damn noise
    when the lil faggot can't hang with the big boys/
    +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
    First time postin my rhymes so let me know what you guys think of my lines
    Comments welcome, critique my shit for me.

    After reading the forum rules I think I'm suppose to post 2 links to where I left a decent comment right??
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...418post2046418
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...19#post2050219
    Last edited by Sensation; February 9th, 2005 at 06:55 PM

  2. #2
    critique my shit. I've been a rap fan for years but have been writing rhymes for about 3 weeks now. So comments will help alot

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