10lines house rules i spit first
lyrically_insane
3x
10lines house rules i spit first
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the only thing truth about you is that your insane/
so imma let the barreta spay and let it lose to ya brain/
and the only thing that your lyrics ad up to is ya wackness/
but imma expose ya skill of its weakness/
and your punches so weak its like you throwin spit balls/
but its ok i say you suckin um over in the corner stall/
and youd only get votes if a mod ghost writes for ya/
and in a battle this dude only knows how to bite/
but im like the cops i'll read him his last rights/
oh ya and the only holes you'll be seein are the ones in ya chest/
quick freestyle
ya i remember
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hey bro im just checkin in so you dont think ima be a noshow....im a have to drop my spit tomorrow though....deadlines midnight tomorrow anyways.....i mihgt drop it a lil later but i dont know....just checkin in though
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still waiting for your drop
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aight,aight,aight......
Fuck all the details, im here to make yall 3x followers understand
3x got a less chance of walking over me then a legless person understrands
He's ducking with "White Dawgg", Theyll both have to be casterated
Kuz 3x's wacker than a teen who just got done masterbating
Ill put a red dot on yo forehead like its part of yo damn religion
Leave a white stain on yo lips after my dick and yo mouth go full-collision
Dont fuck with lyrically insane kuz i stay with various weapons
Ill have slugs coming out yo stomach like ceserean sections
Ill make yo heart rate increase enuff so i could rap off it
3x got merked by insane so im putting the nails to his coffin
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3x
the only thing truth about you is that your insane/
so imma let the barreta spay and let it lose to ya brain/
---not that good of an opener but used personals
and the only thing that your lyrics ad up to is ya wackness/
but imma expose ya skill of its weakness/
---sorry but that was wackness-freestyle or not.
and your punches so weak its like you throwin spit balls/
but its ok i say you suckin um over in the corner stall/
---alright metaphore but not a good punch.
and youd only get votes if a mod ghost writes for ya/
and in a battle this dude only knows how to bite/
but im like the cops i'll read him his last rights/
oh ya and the only holes you'll be seein are the ones in ya chest/
---this last couple bars were not good at all.
Lyrically insane
Fuck all the details, im here to make yall 3x followers understand
3x got a less chance of walking over me then a legless person understrands
---good metaphor, but why tha hell did you both have lines where you didnt really rhyme?
He's ducking with "White Dawgg", Theyll both have to be casterated
Kuz 3x's wacker than a teen who just got done masterbating
---alright punch
Ill put a red dot on yo forehead like its part of yo damn religion
Leave a white stain on yo lips after my dick and yo mouth go full-collision
---alright.
Dont fuck with lyrically insane kuz i stay with various weapons
Ill have slugs coming out yo stomach like ceserean sections
---good metaphore.
Ill make yo heart rate increase enuff so i could rap off it
3x got merked by insane so im putting the nails to his coffin
---good closer.
This was a weak battle and im gonna vote for lyically insane for better punches and more detail in his punches. good metaphores from both of you though. please try an elevate. HIT UP MY BATTLE WITH XPERTEASE IN MY SIG. pz.
3x.....
the only thing truth about you is that your insane/
so imma let the barreta spay and let it lose to ya brain/
WEAK
and the only thing that your lyrics ad up to is ya wackness/
but imma expose ya skill of its weakness/
WEAK AND BARELY RHYMED
and your punches so weak its like you throwin spit balls/
but its ok i say you suckin um over in the corner stall/
......WTF
and youd only get votes if a mod ghost writes for ya/
and in a battle this dude only knows how to bite/
THAT SHIT DIDNT RHYME
but im like the cops i'll read him his last rights/
oh ya and the only holes you'll be seein are the ones in ya chest/
WACK
Overall you had an ass verse, work on ya structure and punches
Lyrically......
Fuck all the details, im here to make yall 3x followers understand
3x got a less chance of walking over me then a legless person understrands
OK
He's ducking with "White Dawgg", Theyll both have to be casterated
Kuz 3x's wacker than a teen who just got done masterbating
IIGHT SOUNDS A LIL PLAYED..BUT IIGHT
Ill put a red dot on yo forehead like its part of yo damn religion
Leave a white stain on yo lips after my dick and yo mouth go full-collision
MEH....
Dont fuck with lyrically insane kuz i stay with various weapons
Ill have slugs coming out yo stomach like ceserean sections
DECENT
Ill make yo heart rate increase enuff so i could rap off it
3x got merked by insane so im putting the nails to his coffin
WEAK CLOSER
Iight your verse wasnt all that but it didnt just suck..it was iight, just work on more complex punches and ya wordplay, you got it in you
V/Lyrically Insane
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On Top....You Worry Bout Tryna Keep Ya Top On.
uppin for sum votes#1
leave feedback and vote,,,,,,,,,leave your threads and ill hit em up
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lyrically had nice structure and better flo so imma go wit him sry 3x anyways hit my battles up in my sig lyrically ....nice job both of y'all......later!!!
Let's Collab!
uppin#2
yo uppin for sum more votes ppl......just drop ya links and ill return da favor
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3x:
the only thing truth about you is that your insane/
so imma let the barreta spay and let it lose to ya brain/
^^No Punch just shit talk
and the only thing that your lyrics ad up to is ya wackness/
but imma expose ya skill of its weakness/
^^NAH man no punch
and your punches so weak its like you throwin spit balls/
but its ok i say you suckin um over in the corner stall/
^^NAH
and youd only get votes if a mod ghost writes for ya/
and in a battle this dude only knows how to bite/
but im like the cops i'll read him his last rights/
^^Nah
oh ya and the only holes you'll be seein are the ones in ya chest/
^^wtf man
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Lyrically_insane
Fuck all the details, im here to make yall 3x followers understand
3x got a less chance of walking over me then a legless person understrands
^^Nice punch and good opener
He's ducking with "White Dawgg", Theyll both have to be casterated
Kuz 3x's wacker than a teen who just got done masterbating
^^Good
Ill put a red dot on yo forehead like its part of yo damn religion
Leave a white stain on yo lips after my dick and yo mouth go full-collision
^^Lol
Dont fuck with lyrically insane kuz i stay with various weapons
Ill have slugs coming out yo stomach like ceserean sections
^^Nice
Ill make yo heart rate increase enuff so i could rap off it
3x got merked by insane so im putting the nails to his coffin
^^Eh not a good closer
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Lrycally had punches so he gets this battle................one sided.
VOTE: Lyricall_Insane
thnx for the votes homies.....uppin#4
uppin for sum votes ppl!!!!
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uppin for sum votes ppl!!!!
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3x ya flow was pretty aight,but ya punches werent hard hitting enough, personals werent very stong, wordplay allgood...
6/10
lyrical hmm i felt flow was the same good, but the punches came out harder.. just had a better drop in the end of it..
7/10
v/ lyrical
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