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    Brace for Impact (Verse 1)

    Here i come muthafuckas! the ~source for what?~
    the only hot shit in this mag is when i ~scortch ya butt~/
    and fuckin ~light ya ass~
    maybe kuz i ~write too fast~
    is why my words turn from lead to fuckin ~nitro gas~/ FOO!
    sayin eminem's beats ~weren't banging~
    you just jealous, yea, you was ~hurt, raymond~/
    you wanted to be producin some ~hot shit~
    built 4 this, fuck, you got no room ta ~talk, bitch~/
    look at your shit, the source, ~greatest hits~
    and the last track is always the ~fakest shit~/
    put your song with anotha ~bumpin track~
    trickin yaself ta thinkin that ya shit was ~comin back~/
    you shoulda gone out with the ~tsunami~
    your dad's gettin pumped, actually havin~ 2 mami's~/
    why am i doin this? you ~askin why~
    well im waitin for your muthafuckin ~ass ta die~/
    you never seein stars kuz you always ~missin me~
    ive always been right here, you just wasn't ~listen-ing~/
    i think its time we put this fuckin nigga out his ~misery~ (gunshot)
    bitchin about eminem's ~history~/
    tryna get a peek at em, tellin 'im ~push his skirt up~
    i water at the mouth waitin for this ~lucious murda~/
    unsigned hype is betta than ya ~whole shit~
    you'll get lucky if someone gon' ride on ya ~ol' dick~/ BITCH!
    im waitin on these rhymes ta fuckin ~waste ya big ass~
    you betta get ready and fuckin ~brace for impact~/BITCH!

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    Original UK mc heartless's Avatar
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    kid....this was wack...elevate....learn to use a solid rhyme scheme....then add some metas in ....maybe some multis or internals....so proverb thoughts....deep....and stick with the topic....not jus write a load of shit off your head.....

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    yea, ur gay
    this whole things on topic
    its a BENZINO DISS
    and ur gay

    "kid....this was wack...elevate....learn to use a solid rhyme scheme....then add some metas in ....maybe some multis or internals....so proverb thoughts....deep....and stick with the topic....not jus write a load of shit off your head....."

    im sure
    i had multis
    and metas
    and my ryhme scheme was tighter than ur mom
    basically, ur post was worthless

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    Original UK mc heartless's Avatar
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    lol @ this herb....well you carry on writin' shit like that....and aim to go nowhere....cuz thats exactly where you'll end up !!! and my post was worthless ?? ok...matches this whole thread then......

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    wow...nice 2 year old insult *claps*
    u say my stuff is shit, lets see u make it famous
    your probly 2 busy gettin pumped up the anus

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    Original UK mc heartless's Avatar
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    wow...nice two year old spelling !!!

    btw herb...wheres your links ??...tut tut ....soon to be closed.....

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    wow, hypocrite
    your shit is spelled all fucked up, and ur dissin my shit
    and this ain't a fuckin battle, why in the hell would i need a link?

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    shut the fuck up both of you. and mind take criticism, if you want to be better.

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    ^^^ill take criticism when it fucking HELPS
    sayin "that was wack" isnt gonna help nobody, now is it
    so stfu unless u gonna help me

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