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    A Look At Society

    Malcom X, 1976..X was assisinated
    The white man harrassed and hated the guy that loved Islam
    Father didnt like the idea of joining with muhammad so he asked his mom
    But the breach with civilization and economics
    Couldnt learn the representation of islamics, while we're living
    and sipping on herbal tonics with saying ebonics
    When we worked hard for the right to live in peace
    Martin King thought it would never cease,
    before they flattened him out like a platnum piece
    Maybe ironed him harder like a Platnium crease
    My opinion and perspective may make me sound like a savaged beast
    But we must teach, the unlearned and the people that need to bleach
    There mind with history and go back in time because its a mystery
    But this is my new perspective, like her as a detective learning about blacks in the 60's
    When you try to diss me, most of your disorted visions sounds like shit G
    Been through crack problems like Bob and Whitney
    Mostly as my pen bleed with unspoken words
    With unspoken heards of hearing the birds churping
    Mind learking for people the answers
    Knowing that only this world is full of cancers


    I wrote this after reviewing some pieces similar to this so tell me how is it

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    this was aight....couldve been alot better though...your wording was quite off....you skipped in and out of totally unrelated topics...but jus try again....cuz there were some good points....

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    ok.....uppin please

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    thiz was ill, took some creativity, i like how u put some history in it, and ya lyrics was coo i was feelin da words u used and multiz, i enjoyed readin diz yo, keep droppin

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    Thanks man, :-D

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    Uppin this shit mayne

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    Quote Originally Posted by LivenLegend
    thiz was ill, took some creativity, i like how u put some history in it, and ya lyrics was coo i was feelin da words u used and multiz, i enjoyed readin diz yo, keep droppin

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    i will agree with hime the history was good but the words where a lil off keep droppin shit though

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    Thanks man! uppin

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