Twin vs. Dymonik

[Twin]

house rules
i spit first
spit within 30 mins.

[Twin]

check

[Twin]

my spits are as HOTT AS HELL...isnt it ironic?...
that your going to HELL and your name is DYMONIK....
you cant hide you cant blend in...
you still stand out even if you were a chemeleon....
60 posts?..so wat....fuck you bitch.....
and if you dont understand...look at the pic in your sig...
i've seen all you battles you im better than you....
how can this CHICAGO boy BEAR to lose....
mealt ya brain....destroy ya cranium.....
you get PLAYED...but not RADIO-active like urainium.....

[DyMoNiK]

first i ripped his mommas denim...then i split her genes...
to make this fucking TWIN...kill him now that hes in his early teens...
my 'punches' will pound out the 'beef'...this isnt a movie and im not 'ROCKY'...
when 'dicks' are flying at you...is the only time you should've got 'cock'y...
you got sloppy...so now imma take advantage of your weakness...
like 'kryptonite' to 'superman'...you couldn't get into R&B's Hall Of Fame...
even if you were 'superfan'...yous just a loser man...so give it up...
retire like 'jay-z' before i 'roc-ya-fella'...cuz your album is 'not-a-sella'...
ill confuse you like 'color-blind drivers'...when i stop-ya-yella...
i bet TWIN 'smoke capris'...cuz hes skinny...what you call a 'bitch stick'...
they suck each other...its like masterbating...they just switch dicks...
thats some sick shit...cant believe that after all he is 'reppin-ak'...
hes been stepping lately...if he steps to this vet hes crazy...
you wanted to spit first im sorry i cut in line...but in time...
you will see that i just gutted your ryme...before it was even dropped...
just start leavin STOP...dont even bother to post...after all this is a win...
if i kill only one of you...is the other one still a TWIN?....

[Twin]

ready for votes

[p O e T i Q u E]

Dymonik takes this one in my vote becuase it wasn't something i've seen over and over again somewhere else. It wasnt the best but it was good.
v/dymonik

[Kill.]

TWIN
my spits are as HOTT AS HELL...isnt it ironic?...
that your going to HELL and your name is DYMONIK....
^^GOOD PUNCH AND NAME PLAY

you cant hide you cant blend in...
you still stand out even if you were a chemeleon....
^^THATS NOT REALLY A PUNCH BECAUSE STANDING OUT IS A GOOD THING

60 posts?..so wat....fuck you bitch.....
and if you dont understand...look at the pic in your sig...
^^GOOD PUNCH CONSIDERING HIS PIC OF THE LITTLE BOY

i've seen all you battles you im better than you....
how can this CHICAGO boy BEAR to lose....
^^GOOD PUNCH

mealt ya brain....destroy ya cranium.....
you get PLAYED...but not RADIO-active like urainium.....
^^ANOTHER GOOD PUNCH AND DECENT CLOSER

DYMONIK
first i ripped his mommas denim...then i split her genes...
to make this fucking TWIN...kill him now that hes in his early teens...
^^NO REAL PUNCH

my 'punches' will pound out the 'beef'...this isnt a movie and im not 'ROCKY'...
when 'dicks' are flying at you...is the only time you should've got 'cock'y...
^^GOOD PUNCH

you got sloppy...so now imma take advantage of your weakness...
like 'kryptonite' to 'superman'...you couldn't get into R&B's Hall Of Fame...
^^WHERES THE RHYME? WEAK

even if you were 'superfan'...yous just a loser man...so give it up...
retire like 'jay-z' before i 'roc-ya-fella'...cuz your album is 'not-a-sella'...
ill confuse you like 'color-blind drivers'...when i stop-ya-yella...
^^WEAK AND PLAYED

i bet TWIN 'smoke capris'...cuz hes skinny...what you call a 'bitch stick'...
they suck each other...its like masterbating...they just switch dicks...
^^WEAK

thats some sick shit...cant believe that after all he is 'reppin-ak'...
hes been stepping lately...if he steps to this vet hes crazy...
^^YOUR NOT A VET AND WEAK

you wanted to spit first im sorry i cut in line...but in time...
you will see that i just gutted your ryme...before it was even dropped...
^^NAH NOT FEELIN THAT

just start leavin STOP...dont even bother to post...after all this is a win...
if i kill only one of you...is the other one still a TWIN?....
^^NICE I LIKED THAT...... THE BEST IN YOUR VERSE IT MADE ME WONDER....

DYMONIK DIDNT COME VERY CONSISTANT IN THIS BATTLE HIS BEST BAR WAS HIS CLOSER................TWIN DID COME CONSISTANT AND HAD BETTER PUNCHES AND NAMEPLAY........MY VOTE GOES TO HIM

VOTE: TWIN

[Twin]

thanx uppin

[gem n eye/*DUO*]

dymonik- I would have voted for you if you didnt have those one or two bars that didnt even rhyme and the fact that your flow was very choppy. You had some great original punches though. If you would have actually tooken the time to reword your drop and go over it a little instead of just throwing the shit together, you would have won.

twin- very creative drop. some good punches and some original shit that I havent seem yet, hence, it wasnt a played out read. Your flow was much easier to follow, which always counts in the long run for a vote. If a guy has to read your bar twice to feel the flow then it really wasnt structured properly. Which wasnt the case in your drop. But again, this was close....your opponent would nearly have gotten the win if he wouldnt have dropped so sloppy.

v. twin

[Twin]

thanx for the feed back, uppin

[3x]

demon didnt come very consistant compared to twin and
other than that it was about the same
and both need to work on punches
and structure
v/twin

[Twin]

thanx uppin

[flame_spitter]

dymonik some of your lines didnt make sense and you structure wasnt all that great...
twin your shit was ok but you still need to elevate!!!!
V/twin

[Twin]

uppin come on vote

[Twin]

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