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Thread: Die Alone

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    Die Alone

    If you think you know redemption, life its temptin

    You know pimpin, im limpin on one leg crawling

    When most people thinks life all about balling

    I'm falling and not gonna stop because of the malicious bitches

    Vicious Stitches, to the head of a concrete accident

    Fakers just act a stint. just tryna stay calm

    Black Jesus stappled to the fucking hand of his palm

    Killa J's the lattest Phenom, waking up from a fucking coma

    A rich mother fucker without a diploma , forming a new version of jaw breaker

    You want to know the fucking meaning of "Law Breaker"?, step into hell with a man that has been vanish and demanish

    Stranded, with people who demanded to die unwanted with a fist lock

    Dying cold within six spots, with wrapping bitches onto my dick within a liplock

    When i know what people saying today aint Hip Hop, Its shit hop

    I see you watching me lifeless laying on the curb, waiting to swerve around this nerd

    Im begging god to please take me home

    Lifes more better with a bitch rather than to DIE ALONE

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    Uuppin

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    this joint was tight i like the set up but it should have been longer piece out kid

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    aight, thanks man!

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    This piece wasnt bad at all...you seem to show you tried here...I think the concept wasnt bad at all...Just a couple of mispelled words here an there...but nothing you cant fix...I can see with a little work you will develop a pretty good style...keep at it...do your thing...

    Hit mine up when you get a chance...thanks ahead...
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...76#post2034276
    Last edited by ELEETE; February 1st, 2005 at 12:21 AM

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