Evil In His Eyes
-C-
Can he see through the evil in his eyes...
Can you see that he's the devil in disguise?
Can he see through the evil in his eyes...
-1-
Can he see through the evil in his eyes...
The stranger follows closely but quietly, lost in a land of sobriety.
He's almost smiling as he grosely grips the knife silently.
Only 4 inches in entirety, but deadly used violently.
He's entirely obsessed by the high that he gets...
His manhood is growing as his inner thigh sweats.
He knows that he's close, almost hearing her breath...
But most of all he's engrossed by the smell that she's left.
He twitches his nostrils, sniffs at the dark.
He fits his fist round the handle, walks to the beat of his heart.
She hardly hears his pace quicken, making her ears strain to listen.
She turns and they get face to face and it looks like they're kissing.
He puts the knife to her throat and whispers 'Don't you dare scream.'
She see's the evil gleam in his eyes, and she's knows that he's real.
She can feel his bitter breath on her neck as her cheeks embrace the steel.
She doesn't dare move, she's frozen in place.
He holds her by the face and says she better do what he says...
-C-
Can he see through the evil in his eyes...
Can you see that he's the devil in disguise?
Can he see through the evil in his eyes...
-2-
Can't you see he's the devil in disguise?
...She cries, his breaths stings her eyes as they stand face to face.
She tries to break away and escape but his grip is too great.
He takes out a fistful of her hair as he throws her too the ground.
He stands there looking at his hand for a second then throws it down.
The pounding of his heart seems to echo all round, matched only by the sound of his breathing.
He's weezing, his eyes seem to be deepening like his eyelids are sleeping.
They appear to of elapsed and been replaced by too collapsed sockets in his face.
His sharp deep breaths that he takes seem to go on forever.
And he never takes his eyes off the victim, his eyes move her with him.
She tries to kick but she misses him and he pounces upon her.
She wishes he would stop, cursing God for turning from her.
His knife graizes her thigh as he cuts away her skirt.
The blood runs in streams as she screams but he doesn't care.
He pulls himself on top of her, using the knife too stop her from screaming any louder.
He rips open her blouse, as she tries to shout he cuts her mouth.
Her now bloody pout is a river of red, he looks into her eyes and says 'don't you wish you were dead?'
Can't you see the evil in his eyes?
-C-
Can he see through the evil in his eyes...
Can you see that he's the devil in disguise?
Can he see through the evil in his eyes...
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Something I just wrote, any feedback is appreciated... And once again, I know its rushed but my attention wanders, lol
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Originally Posted by Novacain
. i dunno, i would still notice if you wrote something like... "as salt sweat drops into his eye" too lol... to be honest, the inner thigh thing kinda grossed me out a bit, no offense. 
