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  1. January 30th, 2005, 11:41 AM #1
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    comic satire....

    this is just some interestin' concepts that i thought of man....read only if you have intelligence....

    like an upside down direction board...il make you go the other way...
    whats the definition of a will ?...come on ! its a "dead giveaway"...
    irrelevant...whats a rain-drop to an ocean ?...
    a chicken crossed a road ? its jus "poultry in motion"...
    i drop first...makin people laugh with witty one liners...
    show me a piano fallin down a mine shaft...il show you "A-flat minor"...
    i think inanimation is animate so....do you reckon...
    when a clock gets hungry it goes back "four seconds"??...
    like a psycho lumberjack...with this load ive been lumbered...
    how am i to live..when even a calenders days are numbered...
    i got evicted...before i got the chance to sell-up...
    i had a photographic memory...jus never developed...
    when you saw 1 shoppin centre...you dun seen "a mall"...
    santas helpers are subordinate clauses...theyre on the long haul...
    like a midget fortune teller in prison...with his whole entourage...
    hes a small medium....but hes still at large...

    safe heres my two links:

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    Feedback on tjesus…
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...97#post2028597


    lets get some feedback
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  2. January 30th, 2005, 11:56 AM #2
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    lol, quality man. clever shit, i've seen that sort of shit before but with diff concepts, this one's classic tho' man, good work.

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  3. January 30th, 2005, 01:24 PM #3
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    safe for the feed.....uppin for some more........
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  4. January 30th, 2005, 02:53 PM #4
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    Stop Sleepin On This Man !!!
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  5. January 30th, 2005, 04:51 PM #5
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    fuck !!! if you dont leave some feedback..i am going to kill you....
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    only jokin...hit this up !
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  6. January 30th, 2005, 05:06 PM #6
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    you are stupid and your raps is what i call trash rap FUCK YOU COME AND DO IT THEN FAGGOT
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  7. January 30th, 2005, 05:10 PM #7
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    ^ lol @ this herb ^

    what he said........uppin for some intelligent votes
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  8. January 30th, 2005, 07:22 PM #8
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    shit man your onto somthin here....your style change..??..you lead well,good to follow,like ya rap.....peace.
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  9. January 30th, 2005, 07:29 PM #9
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    lmao this is some of the funniest stuff i have ever read i was just thinking about doing this nice work.. i liked the one about the piano falling on the miner and the photographic memory that never developed...nice stuff i liked it a lot. 9/10. can you peep my om. its the one without any replies. A hidden knowledge. thanks
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  10. January 31st, 2005, 02:44 PM #10
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    safe for the feed dawgs.....will hit ya back.......
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  11. January 31st, 2005, 02:54 PM #11
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    now son this was really complex, i dont think anyone really understands what this drop means, i like the word play man, thats the first time ive seen sum1 use comedy jokes in a keystyle, coulda shortened the 1st bar at the beggining, i feel it was stretched, made sence, and it went well with the Topic heading, nice drop very deep, like the word play alot, in sum places the syllable count was a lil off, you had a lil repition going on and that kicked this keystyle up a notch.
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  12. January 31st, 2005, 04:23 PM #12
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    safe for the feedback lads......uppin for more
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  13. January 31st, 2005, 04:54 PM #13
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    I was impressed with this drop this was different, definitely not some play it safe type rhyme. It showed alot of imagination and although it was funny it was very thought provoking. Hope their's more!


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  14. January 31st, 2005, 06:23 PM #14
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    your also impressed with his dick FAGGOT
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    well what can i say ??.....most people are....includin' your girl dawg.......ne ways feedback
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