yours is due in 1 hour and i'll spit after you
10 lines
no crew/hate/dickride votes
no recycling/feeding/biting
Super Nova
mywords
yours is due in 1 hour and i'll spit after you
10 lines
no crew/hate/dickride votes
no recycling/feeding/biting
check. . . . . . . .
I looked at your work, ain't goin' nowhere at this rate
Like inexperienced directors, this battle was a miss-take
Merk is an understatement, of what I'll put you through
You're a good example for newbies, of what not to do
Can't step to me, obviously, like midgets to high curbs
On my dick, even as your name you prefers my words
You can't beat me, just stop dreamin' and wishin'
Cuz picturin' the win, is your only corrupted vision
Well, I guess this is it, 'cause you are basically shit
Both prefer my words, only thing we can agree wit'
Come on. You only gave me an hour to spit.
chill man my comp has been fucking up
it says in your user info that you spent an hour on that rap...
man i could write that bullshit in 5 minutes on multi-task...
poor bitch taking that long on a verse to get accepted here...
but all i see in that piece is dirt and signs of rejected fear...
you're tired and the shit is self explanatory... galileo points to your name...
you were a fake star until you exploded from too much self glory... major pain...*
cuz your raps are played and you act great but you suck dude...
too late you can't escape from the wack trap you got yourself into...
lets call this starting on the wrong foot.. like todler shoes...**
you're completely mixed up.. damn that was a quick fuse...***
*- look up the word super nova
**- little kids putting shoes on the wrong foot lol
***- again reffering to his name
IF YOU DON'T GET THE PUNCHES DON'T VOTE
up #1
shit guys verses are pretty tight tho in my opinon ! both had pretty good punches and concpets im gonna have to say my words disses didnt hit as hard as super novas did tho . im giving my vote to super nova just by a hair or two ...
Thanks. Uppin #1.
Super Nova - Aight verse. The what not to do punch was solid. The closer was aight. The rest was really okay... not witty, but hitting and connecting punches. Just work on coming more creative, not much else to say.
mywords - You tried to get creative, but sorry it didn't work. Like don't explain your punches. If they have to be explained, they prolly aren't any good as you wouldn't explain a punch if you were standing with a mic battling someone. Also, work on making your punches more direct. Like his were much shorter than yours, but still hit. Like that major pain one... good concept, just worded very long and poorly so it didn't really hit him. Just work on wording your punches more effectively so they hit and you'll be fine.
Vote - Nova
Uppin #2.
Neither Verse Was Hot... At All.
Super Nove
I looked at your work, ain't goin' nowhere at this rate
Like inexperienced directors, this battle was a miss-take
"Like" Comparisons Are Getting Old Unless Used Extremely Creatively
Merk is an understatement, of what I'll put you through
You're a good example for newbies, of what not to do
Pretty Good, But Herd It Before
Can't step to me, obviously, like midgets to high curbs
On my dick, even as your name you prefers my words
Na...
You can't beat me, just stop dreamin' and wishin'
Cuz picturin' the win, is your only corrupted vision
Extremely Wack And Played
Well, I guess this is it, 'cause you are basically shit
Both prefer my words, only thing we can agree wit'
Good... I Like That, You Need To Put His Name Together As It Is In His Avatar. It Took Me A Little While To Figure Out What You Were Saying.
mywords
it says in your user info that you spent an hour on that rap...
man i could write that bullshit in 5 minutes on multi-task...
You Merely Boasted On Yourself, Not A Strong One
poor bitch taking that long on a verse to get accepted here...
but all i see in that piece is dirt and signs of rejected fear...
Not Creative...
you're tired and the shit is self explanatory... galileo points to your name...
you were a fake star until you exploded from too much self glory... major pain...*
I Get It, But I Don't Get It
cuz your raps are played and you act great but you suck dude...
too late you can't escape from the wack trap you got yourself into...
So, You're Saying You're Wack?
lets call this starting on the wrong foot.. like todler shoes...**
you're completely mixed up.. damn that was a quick fuse...***
I Get It, But Na....
Vote: Super Nova (For ONE Good Line)
NO SIG NEEDED.
Uppin #3.
Uppin #4.
SUPERNOVA
I looked at your work, ain't goin' nowhere at this rate
Like inexperienced directors, this battle was a miss-take
(THIS WAS AN ALRIGHT OPENER COULD HAVE BEEN STRONGER)
Merk is an understatement, of what I'll put you through
You're a good example for newbies, of what not to do
(NICE DISS)
Can't step to me, obviously, like midgets to high curbs
(FUNNEY)
On my dick, even as your name you prefers my words
(HAHA)
You can't beat me, just stop dreamin' and wishin'
Cuz picturin' the win, is your only corrupted vision
Well, I guess this is it, 'cause you are basically shit
Both prefer my words, only thing we can agree wit'
(NICE cLOSER)chill man my comp has been fucking up
MYWORDS...WHILE NOT MYWORDS YELL KNOW WHAT IM SAYINANY WAY
it says in your user info that you spent an hour on that rap...
man i could write that bullshit in 5 minutes on multi-task...
(WEAK OPER PLAYED OUT I ALLREADY USE DAT)
poor bitch taking that long on a verse to get accepted here...
but all i see in that piece is dirt and signs of rejected fear...
(UGH!!)
you're tired and the shit is self explanatory... galileo points to your name...
you were a fake star until you exploded from too much self glory... major pain...*
(WACK WHAT DA FUCK)
cuz your raps are played and you act great but you suck dude...
too late you can't escape from the wack trap you got yourself into...
lets call this starting on the wrong foot.. like todler shoes...**
(AND ANOTHER ONE)
you're completely mixed up.. damn that was a quick fuse...***
THIS BATTLE WAS KINDA ONE SIDES SUPERNOVA HAD MORE HITS COMPARED TO MYWORDS SELFGLORYIFYIN SO
MY VOTE GOES TO SUPERNOVA
yo my vote would be for super nova my words had to explain his punches to people if they aint clear enough for people to read then y even put it in there if i could vote i would say Super nova had it
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