Emotional Piece (They Love Ya When You Dope) by: The Reinvention

[TheReinvention]

Decades have passed and still gots no respect..
i could be jumpin and screamin, they dont react..
Seems like ya gotta have a scheme packed..
To become dope or they wont love ya exact..
You could spit ill rhymes all the time you wanna..
Jus sometimes its better off smokin marijuana..
Takes away the feeling of not being accepted and loved..
So then your not expected 2 spit like its unheard of..
Doesnt matter if ya black, doesnt matter if ya white..
But if ya think back, its just not right ta ignite..
yaself wit flames of rappin and makin proclaimes..
Its better off for a newbie to just follow along..
with what he sees, like he hears in some Eminem songs..
he rights his wrongs by makin himself look like everyone else..
by not acting like ones self, its like puttin
your personality upon ya own shelf..
Emcees fear the unknown, its just a feeling ya get..
When ya know your shit isint as good it use to be yet..
But ya gotta suck up the beef, ya gotta take all the pain.
Ya gotta obtain, and sustain your emcee career..
Make one last name for yourself before ya disappear..



this is something I wrote in like 8-10 minutes. Leave feedback, and I will hit ya back with some.


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[Novacain]

This was decent man, I don't think you got as deep or emotional as the title suggested, but still a nice drop

Above average, a lot better than most Ive been reading lately

Return the reply man
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167239
Thanks

[TheReinvention]

uppin for some more replies.. so can yall give me some feed..

[TheReinvention]

Oh yeah, I replied to ya piece, stuff was hit.. good job..

[TheReinvention]

Come on yall, im uppin and will return the favor.

[IwIlLmErKyOu]

hey man this piece was decent. it could have been better. i was feeling the flow, but it just wasnt quite there. very good structure and everything else though. peace

[Ndustrial Minded]

tight shit bro...no doubt this was damn good....i think you hit it right on.....a lil rough but everythin can be better right?? aight keep droppin bro

[lyrically_insane]

decent drop bro!!!........not quite as emotional as the title makes readers think it is but its all koo......above average but it could use a lil work.....overall 6.5/10

[TheReinvention]

Thanks for the replies. Yall dont have to reply no more.. gonna be workin on a new one.