10 lines
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verse due 45 min after check in
U can spit first since i had to set it up
Heata
O.V.Dose
10 lines
no dr/crew/hate votes
verse due 45 min after check in
U can spit first since i had to set it up
uppin for verse...................................
Yo.
I'm make this quick ..cook em With Wit O. V Dose? your dose Over 'V' like Swallowing Vicks//
why you swallowing dicks? Stop riding for votes..your Writing get votes? //
you have a better chance of seein the sky clear in July on the fourth//
Words of Wisdom ...W.O.W ..all of you faggots go against your name//
cuz none of you spittin knowledge how could you? when i'm blowing up yo brains//
I'm A Noob by this site standards but i smite rappers with holy spits//
overdose on your lyrics? Naw cuz the breathe for this battle is the only way you holdin bitch//
Sub par shit you bring makes laugh my self to sleep...i ain't gon rap about no geek...//
One Dose of my shit son...and you'll passed out in the street with a lasso on your feet...//
cuz you could rap without no beat and still be Ass like Jlos cheeks...//
this was truly a keystyle never stopped to think just typed it but i do need to elevate and i am new to this battlin shit tryin to elevate
so good luck.
just saw this.......check.........................
Fuck personals.........Heata doesnt have a Personality
His profiles blanker than his vote column when he n Feeble were battling
Look who you challenging you newbie...try to keep up PLEASE
You just cant 'measure up' like comparing B-cups to C's
Heat aint from "Miami" but i can share some ad'Vice'
Stop tryin to 'walk tall'...this battle aint Fair-in-height
I'll flat out embarrass you... Im anything except kind
This bitch just had a kid! Look at all of his "stretched lines"
You get ate at close range, only Heata you know about is your furnace
Make you "step up to my plate" cuz your 'elevater's out of service
alright lets get some votes on this...............
Aiight...
Heata...
I'm make this quick ..cook em With Wit O. V Dose? your dose Over 'V' like Swallowing Vicks//
why you swallowing dicks? Stop riding for votes..your Writing get votes? //
you have a better chance of seein the sky clear in July on the fourth//
Iunno if this be 1 whole rhyme or what, but madd weak...
Words of Wisdom ...W.O.W ..all of you faggots go against your name//
cuz none of you spittin knowledge how could you? when i'm blowing up yo brains//
Coulda been suttin, but was nuttin
I'm A Noob by this site standards but i smite rappers with holy spits//
overdose on your lyrics? Naw cuz the breathe for this battle is the only way you holdin bitch//
Wordin fucked up what woulda been a sorta punch
Sub par shit you bring makes laugh my self to sleep...i ain't gon rap about no geek...//
One Dose of my shit son...and you'll passed out in the street with a lasso on your feet...//
cuz you could rap without no beat and still be Ass like Jlos cheeks...//
Last line was a nice punch.
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O.V Dose...
Fuck personals.........Heata doesnt have a Personality
His profiles blanker than his vote column when he n Feeble were battling
Nice punch n personal, good opener...
Look who you challenging you newbie...try to keep up PLEASE
You just cant 'measure up' like comparing B-cups to C's
Played
Heat aint from "Miami" but i can share some ad'Vice'
Stop tryin to 'walk tall'...this battle aint Fair-in-height
lol Nice wordplay, personal and punch
I'll flat out embarrass you... Im anything except kind
This bitch just had a kid! Look at all of his "stretched lines"
lmao
You get ate at close range, only Heata you know about is your furnace
Make you "step up to my plate" cuz your 'elevater's out of service
Good closure.
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Easy to c who won this. Heata, u gotta work on ur structure to start wit. Dont stretch ya rhymes so much, try n keep em compressed. Next, add some punchlines and personals, cuz all u did was shit talk cept ur closure which is a played concept. O.V Dose u was on point every bar, and ur "stretched lines" diss killed it.
Vote - O.V Dose
Plz hit link up in my sig.
Good Luck Fellas.
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uppin 2....................dont sleep on this yall
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sorry man, i cant vote on this, not enough posts, but if i could, my vote would go to O.V.no doubt
Heat aint from "Miami" but i can share some ad'Vice'
Stop tryin to 'walk tall'...this battle aint Fair-in-height
that won u the battle, along with the stretched lines one..... they were hillarious, and very hard hitting..... u had a nice consistency of syllables that helped the flow and structure out... and Heata, u just had these stretched out lines that didnt lead to any personals or punches really..... juss seemed like u were flowin, but still ur structure was mad horrible and really lost u the battle... u had semi-played concepts too
overall, OV is a better MC and it showed in this battle very mush... he had nice punches, and great personals on Heata, while heata just rambled on with a lil flow to back himself up
Ohhh, and even though i cant vote, id greatly apreciate it if u returned the favor and voted on one of my battles in the sig.... one of em is one vote from closing, too..... Thanx alot
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Originally Posted by F-ROQ. (famous)
One Sided Battle..
Realy heata you need to elevate byut you had some nice-tries in there.
O.V.Dose I liked your fair-in-height line... But could of been better but nice try yo.
v/ - O.V.Dose for better wordplay, and punches hit a lil harder.
if i could vote i would say ovdose cuz of the fuckin metas.
You just cant 'measure up' like comparing B-cups to C's
Heat aint from "Miami" but i can share some ad'Vice'
Stop tryin to 'walk tall'...this battle aint Fair-in-height
and your last line.
Easy...one sided
OV took this with easy. His lines werent stretched like fat girls shirts, and he used good witty concepts and wordplay.
Heata, work on everything, work on making your lines shorter, and more effective.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
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