8.5/10....................?
thanx for the honest feedback though
8.5/10....................?
thanx for the honest feedback though
I dont think you read all the way through but...... its okayOriginally Posted by DaYoungsta
Here Is How I See Stat Qou And Gem Both Came 10's In Battling
Smz And Djb 10 For Riding The Topic As It Was Intended
Me 10 For Setting Up The Rhymes And Mixing Both Aspects And For Being A Real Asshole
Viscosity Same As Me.
For Battle Aspect Gem Got It Then Stat Then Me Then Viscosity Smz And Djb
Topic Djb Smz Vis Me Gem Stat
Creativness Gem Me Viscosity Stat Smz Djb
Appealing Smz Djb Me Vis Gem And Stat
Me #1 For Asshole And Humor
to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
^^thats allmost exactly the way i wouldve rated everyone
Oh So Im An Asshole Okay Stat You Aint Getting Shit For Christmad And I Damn Sure Aint Getting You That Nelly Cd.....lol
No Everyone Shined In They Field Very Well Here But I Hate Being Told My Lines Is Weak When I Critisize Myself Hard So If I Like It Which Is Very Rare I Know It Came Out Nice No Beef Though.
to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
^^^lmao @ Nelly cd
DJB:
flow and structure was good.. it seemed like you were forcing to have good vocab, but it was still good... multis were good... overal, nice verse..
Viscosity:
structure was good till the end.. multis sounded forced, but good job... vocab could use some work but nice verse
word~perfect:
wasnt feelin ur structure at first, but it got better... multis were there, vocab was ok.. everything was pretty good except ya structure..nice drop
Noncentz:
blah.. bad start with structure n flow, had some stretched lines...vocab was good, verse was creative... multis were also ok... nice job
gem n eye:
structure n flow was good... had some wordplay... vocab was ok... feelin this verse over the rest so far... nice shit
statquo:
seemed a bit to basic. multis were ok, seemed a little forced in some parts..vocab could use some work but it was ok..not bad at all
smz:
i dunno wasnt really feelin this.. was basic at some points. didnt see much mulits, could use some work on that..vocab was ok at some parts, could also use some work.this was an ok verse..
good collab guys..was pretty long lol. all verses were pretty good, DJB had the best structure in my eyes. but overal, i was feeling Gem n eye's verse... nice drop from all of u!
^^ didnt feel like doin some long feed for all of u so i jus broke it down :P
im nocentz and word perfect pop and my structure is the way i spit i agree it seams odd to everyones but shit its what i know....
im very fast when i spit so i had tyo structure where i would pause and take breaks between all and all my structure is the woarst but my content is wht i appreciate judged thank you for your comment though atleast it was fair
to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
wow thanks for the feedback and word everybody came nice here thanks for letting me in on this
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ya, no shit...thanx a bunch for the feedback yal...so far Im happy w/ my ratings, lol
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yeah thanx for feedback yall but keep it commin............
Yeah, it was little long and at times confusing, but I was feeling it.
Y'all came good with your verse, and i kinda liked the idea of it all
Just holler at me for the next one :P j/p
Hit mine up...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165871
Thanks :thumpup:
good drop
damn...........gem n eye's flow is sick enough to bite..shit I am gonna print this out and study how he rode and imaginary beat somehow. I wanna flow like him. Stat you used big words and that made me uninterested in what you had to say because it blurred the imagery you'd wish to create. Overall this was a classic... I'm gonna report yo niggas for being this damn good....dickriding or not. I don't give a shit.
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yo thanx man for the feedback
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