Hey there!

It looks like you're enjoying Rap Battles Forum but haven't created an account yet. Why not take a minute to register for your own free account now? As a member you get free access to all of our forums and posts plus the ability to post your own messages, communicate directly with other members and much more. Register now!

Already a member? Login at the top of this page to stop seeing this message.

User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 10 of 10

Thread: Death Knocks

  1. #1
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Nov 2014
    Posts
    848

    Death Knocks

    When i die, i want it to start an erosion
    An big explosion, enough to blow up an ocean
    In slow motion, to stop all the people's comotion
    Bitchin and whining, when kids overseas are crying
    Dying and i hope my rhymes are applying
    I still continue but im always trying to do gods will
    Not trying to sell drugs or commit a killing spree to kill
    Anger makes me want to start a killing spree all over the sea
    Set all the fakes out there free, and begin to start smoking
    People are provoking and choking a man that is ready to be taken home
    Breakin and shakin and taking and awakening bullets to the dome
    An innocent bystander taking bullets to the chest
    Mellow tip bullets enough to go through a proof vest
    But i wish i could take away the pain, this guy was an illiterate lame
    He didnt even know what happen because if he was alive, he was half way slain
    Another example and something to take mind is a sample, his name was John
    Just a guy tryna take his daughter to school
    Got shot 15 times with a semi automatic with his 2 year old daughter
    Even 3 bullets seen here and fought her and one just caught her
    The guy holding the trigger didnt realize until he visualize
    Of seeing a dead baby with a teddy bear in front of his eyes
    The casket was ready to rise with both bodies inside
    But he already knew inside, he would rott until he confessed
    But the stress build up so bad, it caused him cartiac arrest
    But he went out wishing the Young girl and Father went out blessed
    But the dirty bastard his a bystander
    Hes so bad, he was my friend...Im not sure why i stand her
    The morale of the story is to think before using a glock
    Because you will never know when DEATH WILL KNOCK

  2. #2

  3. #3
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Nov 2014
    Posts
    848
    uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnn

  4. #4
    Malicious Jynx
    Guest
    good shit homie

  5. #5
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Nov 2014
    Posts
    848
    Thanks.............UPPIN

  6. #6
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Age
    35
    Posts
    451
    Battle Record
    1-1
    flow n structure was ok, some lines seemed a lil structure... was feelin what u were sayin in here..multis were there...vocab was ok.. nothin much to say, was a good a peice... keep droppin stuff

  7. #7
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Nov 2014
    Posts
    848
    thanks...uppin

  8. #8
    Live, Love, Burn, Die
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Florida
    Age
    36
    Posts
    7,718
    Battle Record
    2-5
    Dats cool i like it keep up da good work

  9. #9
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Nov 2014
    Posts
    848
    uppin

  10. #10
    The Drama Club
    Join Date
    Sep 2004
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    2,917
    Battle Record
    25-27
    this was nice real decent hada nice temp in it if it was verbal that isgood job man...oh and ur sig should say One of the Best because in my eyes talib Kweli is one of the best to ever hold amic,pen,and leta lone paper
    Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
    90% How You React To It.

Similar Threads

  1. Opportunity Knocks
    By the Titan in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 12
    Last Post: October 11th, 2010, 01:31 AM
  2. Basketball Player Knocks out Ref for 3 hours..
    By Para[D]ox in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 17
    Last Post: April 10th, 2005, 12:00 AM
  3. Remy Ma Knocks Out Foxy Brown
    By warchild in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 12
    Last Post: February 1st, 2005, 05:15 PM
  4. So this girl knocks on my door at 6:00 am...
    By Sir Tinlee Will in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 61
    Last Post: September 6th, 2004, 09:59 PM
  5. hard knocks
    By InFiNiTe_22 in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: April 6th, 2003, 07:40 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •