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Dude sozzz i accidently posted a new thread i neva knew that you was gonna set
Well do the battle here and maybe have a rematch in the other one?
up2u anywayz ill post my verse soon...
Na We Will Just Do It Here, You Go To Investigated Reports And Ask Them Nicely To Close It.
Thanks
ite its gonna get closed i pmed a mod
So anywayz lets get this battle started...verse comin up soon
When ya Gonna Drop, I Gonna Drop Soon, But I Needa Know How Long You Gonna Be
if this bitch was super glue he wouldnt stick to me saying he was sent to injure me
but he'll never hold his ground like indians in the 19th century
nothings what you meant to me cause i got that spit with the heat
continue to speak my dick'll be in youre mouth like your gums and your teeth
your dicks what you beat and your weak shits fueling my punch
and your battles are misplaced grapes cuz youre losing a bunch
losing your lunch...he stalls so with the razor skills, i slit up his face
this fag could grab salsa and still not pick up the pace
youre hot? haha youre less than claims
and like pyros in a courtroom we question ya flames
So i'll finish u off a little early shall i?
so you can post you're verse and remember bruv...don't be shy
Verts A Herb, He Steps To Me Like I Step To The Beat
Dont Worry Cos You Are Fly Like The Sky.............
...................................Futherst Thing From The Street
With Ya Bitten Lyrics And Ya Played Out Punchlines
You Couldnt Spell Danger, If You Were On Frances Front Lines
Cos When I Said Ill Battle Ya, I Didnt Expect A Herb Name Like Vert
Ya Punches That Bad, You Know That Your The Only Fag They Gonna Hurt
No Personals In Ya Whole Verse, This Is A Straigh Murkin, Better Call A Hearse
Ya Tryna Move On With Ya "Career" But When Ive Finished You`ll Be Stuck In Reverse
Crying About The Rules, Against BlakGuy, You Upped Too Many Times And Lost
You That Stupid Even Readin Ya Own Rhymes Will Leave Ya Eyes Crossed
Dont Worry Vert I Know If You Really Tried You Can Drop Hot
................................ You Just Didnt Try Against Me
HaHa As If, Thats Just Your Excuse, Cos Dope Your Not
Now Fuck Up Outta Here, Me And This Crowd Know Your A Faker
With A No Weight Status, Coming Round Here Thinkin You A Hater
Thinkin Your A Legend Like Kurt, And Yes His Name Was Cobain
You Aint No Legend, You Jus Like To Thing This Is A Game
Pz
Hot Shit! Btw this forum wasn't workin for me thats why i couldn't reply to ya and i only just posted that verse. anywayz...
~Uppin for votes~
i thought vert took this rather easily.. the 19th century and the pace lines did it for me, some unevenly laced multis i caught but the flow didnt seem harmed by it.. sylent nice verse, good rhyme scheme, good disses, not too many punches, not too many personals.. vert took this with a steady flow and nice punches, good battle
can i plz get an honest vote on this im gettin fuckd
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165339
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
Ok...
Vert:
You had some nice lines like the century
indain line...clever...in the pace salsa line
was ok nothing great..steady flow...
structure was meh..sloppy..anyways
decent punches you did have...
sylentz:
you had one line that made me laugh
that eyes crossed ish ha..funny...other
then that meh...work on your punches and
wit...and structure...come more consistant
fam....
v/Vert due to the better wit in punch...
sorry I forget to put my
link...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165541
uppin
Good battle ya, I liked it.
Anyway heres how it went down:
Vert - Aight flow, so-so structure. You got hidden talent kid, I can tell from ya punches. Meh personals. It was good for someone new to this site.
Favorite hidden-talent punch:
"youre hot? haha youre less than claims
and like pyros in a courtroom we question ya flames" I liked that a lot homie... Anyway good work.
Sylentz - hidden talent punches. so-so flow. good structure... Well it was better than Vert's. Had personals....
Favorite punch:
"Verts A Herb, He Steps To Me Like I Step To The Beat
Dont Worry Cos You Are Fly Like The Sky.............
...................................Futherst Thing From The Street" Made me laugh.. Hidden talent its good yo.
v/ - Sylentz for coming a lil harder.
No hate dawg. Nice try though.
Get me back in my battle vs. 'bgizzy' later aight?
Peace homie.
if this bitch was super glue he wouldnt stick to me saying he was sent to injure me
but he'll never hold his ground like indians in the 19th century
ok but so fckin played i s ridicolous
nothings what you meant to me cause i got that spit with the heat
continue to speak my dick'll be in youre mouth like your gums and your teeth
meh k
your dicks what you beat and your weak shits fueling my punch
and your battles are misplaced grapes cuz youre losing a bunch
try at word play so ok
losing your lunch...he stalls so with the razor skills, i slit up his face
this fag could grab salsa and still not pick up the pace
meh
youre hot? haha youre less than claims
and like pyros in a courtroom we question ya flames
So i'll finish u off a little early shall i?
so you can post you're verse and remember bruv...don't be shy
wow k verse and then lost it in the end
Verts A Herb, He Steps To Me Like I Step To The Beat
Dont Worry Cos You Are Fly Like The Sky.............
...................................Futherst Thing From The Street
With Ya Bitten Lyrics And Ya Played Out Punchlines
You Couldnt Spell Danger, If You Were On Frances Front Lines
haha i like this
Cos When I Said Ill Battle Ya, I Didnt Expect A Herb Name Like Vert
Ya Punches That Bad, You Know That Your The Only Fag They Gonna Hurt
meh
No Personals In Ya Whole Verse, This Is A Straigh Murkin, Better Call A Hearse
Ya Tryna Move On With Ya "Career" But When Ive Finished You`ll Be Stuck In Reverse
ive must have heard this 100 times
Crying About The Rules, Against BlakGuy, You Upped Too Many Times And Lost
You That Stupid Even Readin Ya Own Rhymes Will Leave Ya Eyes Crossed
k
Dont Worry Vert I Know If You Really Tried You Can Drop Hot
................................ You Just Didnt Try Against Me
HaHa As If, Thats Just Your Excuse, Cos Dope Your Not
no
Now Fuck Up Outta Here, Me And This Crowd Know Your A Faker
With A No Weight Status, Coming Round Here Thinkin You A Hater
meh
Thinkin Your A Legend Like Kurt, And Yes His Name Was Cobain
You Aint No Legend, You Jus Like To Thing This Is A Game
k ending i guess
im going to give thisd to vert, cause sylents had like one or 2 ok punches, but over vert did better
V/ Vert
hit my battles pz
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