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    The True Psycho of RB
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    Quote This

    I gotta tell theses mcs not to start no shit
    im dope but insane like that donnie darko flick
    switch ya flow, slit ya throat, flip ya quote
    ill hit ya ho, nick ya dough, this is dope
    try and figure out my last two lines
    if you cant do it ill pass you nines
    take a very deep breath now go and rob mcs
    im so hot even god envys, tell me im odd then freeze
    cause im about to turn into the devil
    im a bad guy i learned sins through the ghetto
    but you dont understand these kinda rhymes
    im real but most of mamas boy mcs kinda lie
    would you call me a bastard if i smack these hos
    go find another rapper who could match these flows
    listen you aint a thug cause you snatched one purse
    im already the hottest mc around and this is one verse

    i wrote this a few days back just kinda bragging but my flow is tight and ive been working on my structure more, dont mind critisicm but dont hate.

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    I didnt lik this, like a lot of pieces iv read lately its been to simple

    And i also dont like it coz i think you came fake, iv done that myself but do they have ghetto's in wales??

    Anyways, Id like to see sumfin better and true to you

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    yep theres ghettos over here, ive always lived around dealers, junkies, peado's the lot. stabbings shootings i aint some fake bitch whos 15 talking they live in a ghetto and they dont. this wasnt one of my best verses it just something i threw on here, anyways were u from son? some fucking suburb i bet.

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    Lol, actually, no, I live in the excact same type of place you do. But its not a ghetto, But if you wanna talk abt it, PM me, im not freeposting up your thread

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    i think the flow is kinda hot... even if u aint a active gangsta u sure kno bout gangsta rap.. which will always have its place no matter what peeps say..
    this piece far from the greatest as far as text is concerned.. but the shit is tite and can work on the mic

    pz 1

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    Well, there is a cypher for a reason. This is more of a freestyle, than a poem or open mic. You should post it in there, and than ask people to rate it.

    Decent enogh though.

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    uppin.

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    killed it
    fked it
    ur nice dude nice rappin n shit

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    Lmao that wasnt meant to rhyme

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    thanx 4 the replies this was just a dumb verse i put up my flow is tight but i think my better stuff is my deeper rhymes thats wat ill post up next.

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    Time for proper feedback

    Ok i loved some of yo rhymes...


    take a very deep breath now go and rob mcs
    im so hot even god envys, tell me im odd then freeze
    would you call me a bastard if i smack these hos
    go find another rapper who could match these flows

    Just some of them were pretty choppy like this...

    I gotta tell theses mcs not to start no shit
    im dope but insane like that donnie darko flick

    But tbh u dont need to improve just take a bit more time on ur rhymes and itll be nice

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    decent drop, the flow on it was good and yea like vortex said it be tight on the mic...

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