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Thread: RunnerZ Anthem (rmx)

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    RunnerZ Anthem (rmx)


    Hook:

    *H*.....Holy Hay-Makers be Way pavers lil hood scooby doo
    ...........yea U may hate us cuz We just TOO GOOD to be true
    *N*....Never intend to be friend when u really against the team
    ...........we’ll extend r metal friends n really suspend ya dreams
    *R*....raw Rap rams rear like crash car rally races on daily basis
    ...........u ain’t on face level, no face to face so belly face it


    Verse1:
    Without a doubt I trace these faces down
    Chase the traces they amount to hidden places
    I get ridden on a daily basis, u can’t compete
    I got more ways than mases, u can’t come meet
    Have u lost givin me more days to raise this
    More space to place this....law case n lace it
    Four days to make it
    Doorways we brake in....steppin’, reppin’
    tappin the pendle, we hypnotize you rappin’
    clappin’ you gentil, spankin, wackin’ ya mental
    I’m thankin’ while snatchin ya rental
    I’ll send a pic of my rear end to ya temple
    Sayin’: “ here plz attach ya dental “.......*bite me*
    u couldn’t track fight me wit beats from lantern
    we raps very own fundamental phantoms........


    Hook:

    *H*.....Holy Hay-Makers be Way pavers lil hood scooby doo
    ...........yea U may hate us cuz We just TOO GOOD to be true
    *N*....Never intend to be friend when u really against the team
    ...........we’ll extend r metal friends n really suspend ya dreams
    *R*....raw Rap rams rear like crash car rally races on daily basis
    ...........u ain’t on face level, no face to face so belly face it


    Verse2:
    evil intentions get put in reverse once HNR is mentioned
    we tend to revenge so attempts cease from tension
    u can’t invade the inner sanctum, we great r spinners spank em
    u tried to hold back n reserve ya last slurp of skill, I drank em
    must hurt to feel the prankin, we crank yankin’
    rankin’ this crew among the BesT, Berlin is blessed
    workin’ with Word Perfect wordin these raps
    learnin’ to press full court n a half
    done some dull sport in the past....but gained big speed
    box nasty with quick feet, re-treat...trick plz
    it’s BIG B n 6feet backed up by Psyko and PBK
    watch the grip over heat when we light-yo greedy face
    we might throw really great linez
    and at times we solar ray shine but nevermind
    it’s not all of the time only when we online....n that’s all of the time
    we all of a kind ready to blind u, hide u n forgettin to find u
    we grind too but between you n us stands a times-two....
    talkin bout rhymes dude....


    Hook: 2x
    Hit N Run

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    The concept wasn't too original but i liked this drop actually...The chorus was hot for sure and you used some nice multis in there. Vocab, flow, wordplay, shit was tight! Love this bar:

    *N*....Never intend to be friend when u really against the team
    ...........we’ll extend r metal friends n really suspend ya dreams
    ^probly my favo in chorus...

    Good drop man, topic isn't really deep or shit but it's still straight spitting so it's all good!

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    is an Anthem ever a truly deep drop???....I wonder
    anyways thx for the feed ma....pz
    Hit N Run

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    aight aight....good drop

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    ahem....feedback plz....pz
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    this was a nice piece for an anthem...i really liked the wordplay it was smooth in this piece...the structure of your bars was nice...liked how you kept on topic...but the vocab duke in my opinion could have been better, but maybe complexity wasnt what you were after in this rhyme...keep elevating duke....i really enjoy reading stuff you HnR kats be putting out....one

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    nice drop mans flow was tite fa real and nicely written... got a bit boring towards the end for me tho

    cool shit G keep em poppin'
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    thank y'all for the mostly positive comments....now keep it comin'...pz
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    nice drop. keep it up.

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    Nice one Berlin..............keep ya shit up..........

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    thx for the feed fam...anymore comments?...pz
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    nice drop bro...topic not to original but flava was there i liked it was like a anthem...you should try putting this into audio or something...vocab wasnt to bad seemed fitting for the peace...flow was also good i liked it didnt seem to off putting...the hook didnt really connect with me well i think it should have been more catchy mos def for a anthem...but overall nice work....

    peep my drop steps of heaven..one love

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    thx for the feed I'll return the favor fa sho...uppin for more...pz
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    last up on this....maybe....pz
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