Im da streets diciple the underground queen/
niggaz hear i ma female so they step 2 me/
Dont get me wrong ma style is str8 hood/
ma flow so crazzie even the devil get shook/
Im gods descendant straight from heaven/
ma flow so tight like apallo 11/
Im The rappin version of muhammad ali/
n i take life one step at a time 2 create ma destiny/
And ma future is 2 b da Queen of dis industry/
So slowly im workin from little 2 lots/
cause preety soon ima b da queen of da block/
You need to work on the flow, the meaning and everything eles
You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
this was a bit poor ya flow was really bad some of it didnt rhyme to good, the structure was ok but keep posting and you'll improve, peace.
reply to my last post if you like the real shit.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163763
Its 2 links not 1
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