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  1. January 1st, 2005, 04:15 PM #1
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    Hesitation (topical)

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...78#post1952378
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...86#post1952386



    smashin the gas fast acceloratin persperatin waitin/
    to hear news breakin of a black male they chasin/1
    after a confrontation 4 malez entered gunz blazin/
    unmistakinly took a life and fled without hesitation/2
    twelve-o'four AM shots fired and police racin/
    radio sayin we got a victim comin from the station/3
    he was standin on the corner talkin that gangst shit/
    put in a perdicament bullets through his ligaments/4
    he couldn't believe he was shot down leakin out his dreams/
    black Nissan leaves the scene Jakes try to intervene/5
    all 4 of them thinkin it was either him or me/
    changin masks, hoody's and jeans gettin rid of they machines/6
    push the whip to 62 straight through the avenue/
    blastin past a blockade doin what they had to do/7
    doesn't matter who got in the way I won't stop today/
    4 boys that went astray 5-0 don't want to play/8
    so i turned right and hit the brakes while 3 kids hopped out/
    thought about it for a second then i hit the gas and bounced/9
    now im on the road alone and know im not goin home/
    tried to reach for my phone to call up this girl symone/10
    looked up to the road and saw the spike strips they had thrown/
    kareened off the street all 4 tires blown/11
    they had chrome to my dome and i had heat under my seat/
    but i hesitated to reach, they put me 6 feet deep//12


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  2. January 1st, 2005, 04:30 PM #2
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    Yo pretty good, the flow was good, the concept was good , everything was good but not late....Also, i didnt see any multi's only a few....they we're ok.


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  3. January 1st, 2005, 05:37 PM #3
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    thanx for the feedback man...and there are more than a few multi's.....

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  4. January 1st, 2005, 05:49 PM #4
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  5. January 1st, 2005, 05:50 PM #5
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    already did...thanx for the feedback...

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  6. January 1st, 2005, 09:02 PM #6
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    Uppin for FeedBack....

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    I liked this. You had some good vocab in there. You also stayed with the story line, and didn't go off. Keep it up.
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  8. January 2nd, 2005, 02:31 AM #8
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    thanx and uppin.....

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  9. January 2nd, 2005, 02:49 AM #9
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    shit was on point dawg!
    "Never will I stop being//
    dat ni66a who I be!//
    Get used to it cocksuckaz//
    cause ain't no changin' me//
    U living dangerously, on the edge,
    and I'll push ya//
    hope you fall so that you can look up!"

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    thanx and uppin again.....

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