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Thread: my gansta side

  1. #1
    ninjaboy
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    my gansta side

    not one of my deepest pieces, but everyone has some gansta in em, here's a little of mine.



    Clack-click
    somebody pulls out a ratchet, a gat which,
    spits over seven rounds a second,
    you gonna learn your lesson,
    i'm the wrong one to be testin
    when you see me act like you know me, or get cut like the rest
    mess with the best I'll make a mess out ya chest
    not impressed? i guessed as much
    ya scared to touch these guns i clutch
    and what i want is mine, just because i said so
    but the drugs fucked with my mind, now i'm so forgetful.
    keep a rosary hangin high, from the nearest bedpost,
    but my closet holds a nine, and a lotta red clothes,
    but you know, these red flags should send red flags to ya brain.
    if you wanna remain bitch you'd better refrain
    from fuckin with me, no i'm not an OG, i'm to young for that,
    that don't me that i don't stay with the gats
    and i'm not from the hood, that don't mean i wont shoot you,
    motherfucker, you wouldn't believe the things that i'd do to,
    ya bitch or ya family, no one is safe,
    but its safe to say that you can't escape,
    the caped crusader, well, minus the cape
    you bitches talkin shit, bout to see what i'm about
    but my name aint dick, so keep it out ya mouth


    you know how we do, i'll return all love, so hit me up with some feedback.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161664
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...76#post1939776
    Last edited by ninjaboy; December 30th, 2004 at 03:50 PM Reason: adding links

  2. #2
    ninjaboy
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    uppin, everybody sleepin, its a sad world

  3. #3
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    It was nice a
    uncovered things which someone may be thinkin more of which they wouldnt
    it had some points in it that were dramatic others climaxed toa point of a tru G's mind..it was nice
    Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
    90% How You React To It.

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    Dune Methane CrazyCarl's Avatar
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    Definitely showin off the gangsta side. Favorite bar was
    "when you see me act like you know me, or get cut like the rest
    mess with the best I'll make a mess out ya chest"
    You kept a good structure throughout, the lines didn't seem stretched.
    Thanks for checkin mine out.

  5. #5
    GhettoFabolous
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    keep a rosary hangin high, from the nearest bedpost,
    but my closet holds a nine, and a lotta red clothes,
    but you know, these red flags should send red flags to ya brain.
    if you wanna remain bitch you'd better refrain

    Nigga that shit right there was nice.

    you bitches talkin shit, bout to see what i'm about
    but my name aint dick, so keep it out ya mouth

    I feel u there. Shit u spittin was aight in some places, dope in them ^, a lil whack in others tho. Gotta up consistency, but yo man, nice piece. Was short n direct to da point, i was feelin it dogg.

    Stay writin.

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    Newbie KOzS's Avatar
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    strait gangsta ... not bad still .. this was a cool flow

    fav line was that "it's mine cause I say so" .. dope

    stay up

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  7. #7
    ninjaboy
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    thanx, uppin for more feeds, drop a link and i'll return the love

  8. #8
    ninjaboy
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    uppin

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    This was o..k....nice writtens...they flow was on point...had that merking type of attitude toward it..I liked it...

    3.8/5

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    Banned Chronic Cancer's Avatar
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    it was hot for bein a "G" Thang..LOL.....Keep Dropin like this it dope...

    Peep This and reply...
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163440

  11. #11
    ninjaboy
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    up for more, thanx guys

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    too simple rhymin...topic is blah...elevate as we all do...pz
    Hit N Run

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  13. #13
    Interpersonal
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    wasnt really feeling this....like Berlin said it was really simple...and i really aint into that whole gangster fascination type rhyme scheme...keep elevating duke...one

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