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Thread: questions????

  1. November 23rd, 2004, 12:56 AM #1
    jimbean
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    questions????

    jim bean the furious....



    why... a question converse, to mention my verse...
    at that i unhurst...the mind... the reason we incline..
    the sober leashin drinkin wine...bein blind...we in times
    where a fines bein crimes, for fillin binds...journals that
    thermal my rhymes...
    where...because to speak is to impare, the sleekest tunes
    i share... the weak is whom pry bare...a mouth without
    words opinions assumed die there...
    who...because reals gimmic for stayin true...and heals
    a mimmic for reachin hieghts you couldnt see in you...
    in others in others perspectives im seekin through...each
    of us speakin weakin old bonds for breathin new...
    when... bathe in tomorrow like the day after is the end
    grave to share sorrow you only borrow what you lend...
    trend to bend boundries that blister life... the striphe
    i chizzle with this pen...
    you ask me why? like the only person who concludes
    questions is i... you ask me where? on the same battle
    grounds and war remains over soil that we share...
    you ask me when? and i could say ten...but what
    matters how many years you could mend..you ask me
    who? when living fortifies every question evolved till
    time is dew........
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  2. November 23rd, 2004, 12:58 AM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156315
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155932
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  3. November 23rd, 2004, 10:40 AM #3
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    ooo... im on a roll of readin ill topics... this is another one, i liked how u did it too...

    only thing i didnt like was that it wasn't on point enough... there were bars i just couldnt understand first time i read it... and, imo, rhymes shouldnt be mysteries.
    however u flipped an ill topic with some ok rhymes.

    just work on being perfectly clear with what ur saying and ull have some reeeal nice shit
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  4. November 24th, 2004, 08:26 PM #4
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    right good lookin alota ma shits based on stressed sylobols so i could see where you could get it twisted... but man ill be up audio hopfully in a few months...
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  5. December 24th, 2004, 10:21 PM #5
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  6. December 25th, 2004, 12:03 PM #6
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    yeah this was a nice verse, the flow and structure was tight, there was deep lines too, it was a nice drop.
    reply to my last drop.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162318
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  7. December 28th, 2004, 06:26 PM #7
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    right good lookin warchild always apreciated good or bad feed constructive to be exact...
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  8. December 28th, 2004, 06:59 PM #8
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    yo,

    its ight but could have had more of a punch to it... Feel Me?
    Keep uppin ya game,

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  9. December 28th, 2004, 07:09 PM #9
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    you are very expressive and paint the image very well i like your work i cant hoope but wonder who your influences
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  10. December 28th, 2004, 07:09 PM #10
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    pbk, did you even read this drop....
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  11. December 28th, 2004, 08:22 PM #11
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    I liked the drop but i wasn't a big fan of your structure which kind of turned me off to it a bit...it was good imagery and made me think the way that you described things....i liked that...u should keep it up...i'm not realy going to suggest that you change your structure because well...it's diferent and it's u and it's not wack...not really battle structure but it will do....keep droppin ur stuuf its nice..

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  12. December 28th, 2004, 09:18 PM #12
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    yo good discription man i liked this man. good shit keep it up
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  13. December 28th, 2004, 11:13 PM #13
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    Alright vocab.
    Pretty good rhymes too.
    Just keep thinking up better concepts i guess.
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  14. December 29th, 2004, 03:47 PM #14
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    yo j thanks for the feedback this peice was really well written, alot of vocab, and alot of concepts well thought of.. at a poetic stand i think it was top 10 best i ever read
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  15. December 29th, 2004, 07:36 PM #15
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    right good lookin yall when i first got in this game it was mainly about who could come out with the latest so if you cant relate its cause im constantly elevating... and the level most are at ive already lapped... another contious m.c.
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