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Thread: Shit hits da fan

  1. December 20th, 2004, 10:22 PM #1
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    Post Shit hits da fan

    Neva new when it was comin but it hit me hard
    Thought everything was good but it left me scard
    It was just the other day when i was roaming round
    Then shots went off and i was laying flat on da ground
    Neva saw it comin so shit hit me by surprise
    The same day it happen i got told i wasn’t wise
    I don’t know if God wanted to show me a sign
    Life’s a bitch now i know da importance of my nine
    First duckin cops and stealin now this bullshit
    Seems like a burdens on my back with a full clip
    Didn’t really understand why shit got hectic
    All i know is that i pretty much had enough of it
    Maybe this is one of my trials and tribulations
    But my head is analyzing this as death simulations
    It’s got my mind fucked up like it was swollen
    Tryin ta figure out why a gun is always what um holdin
    Couldn’t be more sweeter for my haters to see
    The look on my face and the falling of a G
    Paranoid as fucks thinking about how my life turned
    Seeing the truth in the matter that now um getting burned


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  2. December 20th, 2004, 10:51 PM #2
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    Wasnt the best bro, but the vocab was there. Your flow was down, didnt like the topic 2 well..but good read.

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  3. December 20th, 2004, 11:00 PM #3
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    thanks man_uppin for more feed
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  4. December 21st, 2004, 12:33 AM #4
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    played topic, vocab seemed there at the end. coo flow..

    btu i dont know why, but I like this piece alot.. seems I know where your coming from.. even tho I use the comptuer doesnt mean I dont have a different life then just internet rapping and jokign.. I feel you man, I know wuss good.. I live in chi..
    this piece was very tight, I liked it alot.. good looks
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  5. December 21st, 2004, 12:44 AM #5
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    thanks man...finally someone is relatin to me_uppin for more feed
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  6. December 21st, 2004, 12:50 AM #6
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    It was decent drop, nothing spectacular.
    Flow was basic, content was basic..
    Just an overall basic drop...
    but keep it up.. practice makes perfect


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  7. December 21st, 2004, 12:52 AM #7
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    I liked it... not yur best cuz... well, you've thrown some tuff shit before... but it was a good read... props
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  8. December 21st, 2004, 01:01 AM #8
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    thanks man_i just wanted ta get this off my head_uppin for more feed
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  9. December 21st, 2004, 01:30 PM #9
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    yo that shit was hot i could feel what you was sayin'.Lovely vocab keep up the good work.
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  10. December 21st, 2004, 09:13 PM #10
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    Thanks man_uppin for some more feed plz
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  11. December 21st, 2004, 11:56 PM #11
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    flow and structure was good..but the rest of it was pretty basic i think..i mean your rhymin words are played out...try usin different vocab...i liked your topic though..it hit nice..the imagery wuz there..not very strong ....but it stood...creativity wasnt that strong either..but overall an ok drop..keep it up.
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  12. December 22nd, 2004, 12:04 AM #12
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    Return the favor here please

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  13. December 22nd, 2004, 12:43 PM #13
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    Aight man um got u_thanks 4 da feed

    uppin for more
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