jay uu VS. emceed

[jay uu]

so who is your vote for?...........................

[Southern Finest]

This is my last free post sorry mods....Below is from the rules for Frontlines

2. IF YOU UP YOUR THREAD MORE THAN 5 TIMES YOU WILL BE DQ'd. an up is any post made after both verses are up. If you need more votes, you are to vote on someone else's battle and simply put a link to your battle after your vote.

[Emceed]

thanks for the feed back, its apreciated ill check the links in a mo, i was trying to creat some imagery, as if it was a real battle.

[jay uu]

sorry i dont quite get what am doin rong dogg 2 be close 2 d/qification?

[Bo$$ Playa]

Up here on the stage You neva gona land a punch on me, but above all,
Your aimings well off, You couldnt hit a barn door with a shovel,

Fuck it,you shouldnt be here,you should be up in your room playin a-
videogame,
Or sittin with a pencil making some new shit, you should start wid a-
new username

lol, nice lines, emceed won this no doubt, jay uu nice try tho, propz playas

[Emceed]

uppiinn(3) please make some votes, leave links and i will leave feed back.thanks

[PuffNGive]

Emceed
This here mic is like an extension of Emceeds body,
This whole clubs a heart, your a desease, im the aniti body.
----good creativity, soft punch, Rhymed the same word... 1/3
Up here on the stage You neva gona land a punch on me, but above all,
Your aimings well off, You couldnt hit a barn door with a shovel,
---- good punch, good creativity, not good flow 2/3
Your not wanted at any of the clubs youve had more cancelations,
Than Slims had dykes waving banners at lesbian rights demonstrations.
---- good punch, creative too, flow was good 3/3
Fuck it,you shouldnt be here,you should be up in your room playin a-
videogame,
Or sittin with a pencil making some new shit, you should start wid a-
new username
---- good flow, ok diss, not to creative 2/3
Most MC's throw punches, your waving a hand bag screamin self admiration.
Next time ill refuse to battle you till you got mind to mic coordination.
---- creativity was on, flowed ok, nice punch 2/3
Every night your dicks on hand outs, Ring a 0898 bitch, but she puts you on- automated!
And afterwards we can fight, like boxers, just dont stand on the scales you- underweighted.
---- good finisher, nice punch, 3/3

Overall 13/18

jay uu
emceed go get yourself a reccorder
cause am about to drop a rap in a flowing order, amma teach you how to
am gunna turn your ass upside down
cause this seems like eminem facing a clown,
---- ok flow, a little creativity but not much, could'v worded better 2/6
you think your some great MC, you rap like someone from walt disney
ill flip your ass like i flip burgers
you are a seriousy joke go back to the circus,
---- ok flow, should'a used bigger words, soft punch, 1/6
your a perfectic waste of time,even your mom's is gettin tired of hearing you rhyme,
am keepin her up late to be fare
your like a kid wid homework you jst dnt care
---- More played lines, flow was totolly off 1/6
your like a dog always licking ass
my lyrics are gonna brake you like glass n then sufficate you like gas,
i wont pass up the chance to finish this faggety newbie
your just a fake ass mutherfucking wannabe
---- more played lines, not much flow, 2/6
i have seen more talent in a person wid speciaL need
but then agen wah you expect with a name like emceed
---- your best bar by far, good flow, liked this line 3/3
you choking when i start spitting
believe i won this battle its already writtten
my lyrics are genuine yours are fake,
wantin'to battle with me, that was your biggest mistake......
---- playd lines, self glorification is not good, shitty closer 2/6



overall 11/33


You both could have used a lil better vocab, and punched a lil harded,
Vote--- Emceed.... i can't poll vote yet but when i can i will be sure to poll this...

[Emceed]

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[jizza]

Emceed-

This here mic is like an extension of Emceeds body,
This whole clubs a heart, your a desease, im the aniti body.

Could of been much better if the club part wasn't mentioned

Up here on the stage You neva gona land a punch on me, but above all,
Your aimings well off, You couldnt hit a barn door with a shovel,

I consider this thread as a stage so its aight, but I still didn't like the line.

Your not wanted at any of the clubs youve had more cancelations,
Than Slims had dykes waving banners at lesbian rights demonstrations.

Best punch right here...

Fuck it,you shouldnt be here,you should be up in your room playin a-
videogame,
Or sittin with a pencil making some new shit, you should start wid a-
new username

I liked this one too, personal without using his actual name

Most MC's throw punches, your waving a hand bag screamin self admiration.
Next time ill refuse to battle you till you got mind to mic coordination.

I consider this aight too, cause you are battling somebody...rapping, so shit, whats wrong with saying mic..

Every night your dicks on hand outs, Ring a 0898 bitch, but she puts you on- automated!
And afterwards we can fight, like boxers, just dont stand on the scales you- underweighted.

I din't like this closer.

Jay uu

emceed go get yourself a reccorder
cause am about to drop a rap in a flowing order, amma teach you how to
am gunna turn your ass upside down
cause this seems like eminem facing a clown,

These two bars sucked....I din't like them

you think your some great MC, you rap like someone from walt disney
ill flip your ass like i flip burgers
you are a seriousy joke go back to the circus,

I don't even know how your flow is going right now, but it was wack

your a perfectic waste of time,even your mom's is gettin tired of hearing you rhyme,

not too hard

am keepin her up late to be fare
your like a kid wid homework you jst dnt care

aight I guess

your like a dog always licking ass
my lyrics are gonna brake you like glass n then sufficate you like gas,

extremely elementary

i wont pass up the chance to finish this faggety newbie
your just a fake ass mutherfucking wannabe

too wordy, fake ass is a wannabe

i have seen more talent in a person wid speciaL need
but then agen wah you expect with a name like emceed

I like the first line, but the second line ruined it

you choking when i start spitting
believe i won this battle its already writtten

Whatever

my lyrics are genuine yours are fake,
wantin'to battle with me, that was your biggest mistake......

horrible closer

I think that this was a pretty weak battle. Jayuu's structure sucked balls....while emceed's was pretty good. Emceeds flow was better but both could use some work. As for vocab, I think emceed took that. No multi's were used but Emceed's punches were harder and less elementary. Overall, Emceed was better

vote:
emceed

[sefton blake]

safe safe : emceed did you mate, no questions. Jayuu's lack of structure made it difficult to read, wordplay wasn't bad but incoherent. Emceed kept the lines nice and structured, flowed to read, killed Jayuu with the puch lines and consequently took the battle.

seffie bee

[tonguetwista]

alright, nice battle from both of...

emceed:you had nice flow, rhymes and some good punches
This here mic is like an extension of Emceeds body,
This whole clubs a heart, your a desease, im the aniti body.
...nice opener......
Up here on the stage You neva gona land a punch on me, but above all,
Your aimings well off, You couldnt hit a barn door with a shovel,
....pretty good follower.....
Your not wanted at any of the clubs youve had more cancelations,
Than Slims had dykes waving banners at lesbian rights demonstrations.
Fuck it,you shouldnt be here,you should be up in your room playin a-
videogame,
Or sittin with a pencil making some new shit, you should start wid a-
new username
.....hah i liked the whole videogame;username thing, it was tight....
Most MC's throw punches, your waving a hand bag screamin self admiration.
Next time ill refuse to battle you till you got mind to mic coordination.
....another nice rhyme here.....
Every night your dicks on hand outs, Ring a 0898 bitch, but she puts you on- automated!
And afterwards we can fight, like boxers, just dont stand on the scales you- underweighted.
....decent ending........

jay uu-emceed go get yourself a reccorder
cause am about to drop a rap in a flowing order, amma teach you how to
....confusing.....the recorder;order sounded good, then you lost me here^didnt rhyme.
am gunna turn your ass upside down
cause this seems like eminem facing a clown,
..aight not bad......
you think your some great MC, you rap like someone from walt disney
ill flip your ass like i flip burgers
you are a seriousy joke go back to the circus,
your a perfectic waste of time,even your mom's is gettin tired of hearing you rhyme,
....alright not too bad, jus a little confusing but not bad......
am keepin her up late to be fare
your like a kid wid homework you jst dnt care
your like a dog always licking ass
my lyrics are gonna brake you like glass n then sufficate you like gas,
i wont pass up the chance to finish this faggety newbie
your just a fake ass mutherfucking wannabe
....pretty good, i liked these here;nice rhyme n flow...
i have seen more talent in a person wid speciaL need
but then agen wah you expect with a name like emceed
you choking when i start spitting
believe i won this battle its already writtten
....pretty good punches here....
my lyrics are genuine yours are fake,
wantin'to battle with me, that was your biggest mistake......
....nice ending with a good punch...

alright...you guys both threw some good punches, and some some good rhymes. But my vote goes to emceed because he had better flow, structure and his was way less confusing to me. jay uu, you did pretty good too...just too confusing.

v/emceed

[Aight]

not bad, not bad. i think the whole thing was a little predicatable though on both ends. i'd say emceed came with wittier concepts and kept the flow clean...so did jay nu, but his rhymes were pretty elementary. i think if you varied the words up to things that weren't so typical you would definitely start servin cats. alas for now..

v-emceed.

[Emceed]

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[PonyBoy_BV]

"Jayuu's lack of structure made it difficult to read, wordplay wasn't bad but incoherent"
(Taken from Sefton Blake's post) That sums it up. It did get better toward the end, but it was too late and too weak....

Emceed had nice wordplay (although soft hits at times), and you both stayed away from dissin moms (except "your a perfectic waste of time,even your mom's is gettin tired of hearing you rhyme") which seems to be comin up on everyone's battles on here...

If I could vote = emceed

[PuffNGive]

i juss got my 100th post so im pollin my vote now............................................... ..............................................