Shit hits da fan

[Omniscient]

Neva new when it was comin but it hit me hard
Thought everything was good but it left me scard
It was just the other day when i was roaming round
Then shots went off and i was laying flat on da ground
Neva saw it comin so shit hit me by surprise
The same day it happen i got told i wasn’t wise
I don’t know if God wanted to show me a sign
Life’s a bitch now i know da importance of my nine
First duckin cops and stealin now this bullshit
Seems like a burdens on my back with a full clip
Didn’t really understand why shit got hectic
All i know is that i pretty much had enough of it
Maybe this is one of my trials and tribulations
But my head is analyzing this as death simulations
It’s got my mind fucked up like it was swollen
Tryin ta figure out why a gun is always what um holdin
Couldn’t be more sweeter for my haters to see
The look on my face and the falling of a G
Paranoid as fucks thinking about how my life turned
Seeing the truth in the matter that now um getting burned


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161025
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161041

[TheReinvention]

Wasnt the best bro, but the vocab was there. Your flow was down, didnt like the topic 2 well..but good read.

7.2/10

[Omniscient]

thanks man_uppin for more feed

[Vis]

played topic, vocab seemed there at the end. coo flow..

btu i dont know why, but I like this piece alot.. seems I know where your coming from.. even tho I use the comptuer doesnt mean I dont have a different life then just internet rapping and jokign.. I feel you man, I know wuss good.. I live in chi..
this piece was very tight, I liked it alot.. good looks

[Omniscient]

thanks man...finally someone is relatin to me_uppin for more feed

[ILLunatic]

It was decent drop, nothing spectacular.
Flow was basic, content was basic..
Just an overall basic drop...
but keep it up.. practice makes perfect


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161425

[Predatorian]

I liked it... not yur best cuz... well, you've thrown some tuff shit before... but it was a good read... props

[Omniscient]

thanks man_i just wanted ta get this off my head_uppin for more feed

[YoungTuan]

yo that shit was hot i could feel what you was sayin'.Lovely vocab keep up the good work.

[Omniscient]

Thanks man_uppin for some more feed plz

[Civilized Gangsta]

flow and structure was good..but the rest of it was pretty basic i think..i mean your rhymin words are played out...try usin different vocab...i liked your topic though..it hit nice..the imagery wuz there..not very strong ....but it stood...creativity wasnt that strong either..but overall an ok drop..keep it up.

[Civilized Gangsta]

Return the favor here please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161628

[Omniscient]

Aight man um got u_thanks 4 da feed

uppin for more