Emerge - "Acid Tears" REAL REPLIES WILL GET REAL RESPONCES

[Emerge]

www.soundclick.com/emerge

"Acid Tears"

This is me... just well you will listen

dont come in here with half assed replies be honest and seriously listen to the whole song i put the lyrics up because i know the quality aint the best and because i have a weird accent sometimes

please i beg of you to come at me correct and i promise to show you the same respect

oh and since i know that you wont understand some lines you can ask any question i will answer it for you... if you even care to know what the deal is

[SoNiK]

Beat: -- (It's not your beat, not hating, just can't score you on that)
Flow: 8.5
Very clear, I understood about 90% of the things you said... The things I didn't understand was because some of the multi's had bad overdubbing. I think you'd sound a lot better without overdubbing. Without it, you flow really confident and hard, but when you overdub, it's hard to understand some of your lines. I liked your multi's and the content of your lyrics. You didn't overcomplicate your verses. One thing... On some lines you do a monotone spit with overdub, at the 0:46 second part of the song is where you do it once. I ain't feelin that too much. I mean you did it right, but I don't think it's a good method of spitting. Try to stick to one way of delivery in one song so it doesn't confuse the listener too much. You can switch it up from song to song like Fabolous does, but don't switch it up on the same song, it's very hard to do right.

Hook: 7.5
It's kind of basic. It flows well so it gets the job done, but it's just not spectacular. I'm picky about hooks though so don't feel too bad about that. I usually only like Eminem's and 50 Cent's hooks, that's how picky I am lol.

[Emerge]

Hey man I appreciate the honesty dog and the thought put into the post. You didn't put up any links so ama just go and look for something of yours to reply to.

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[unknownerror]

flow was good and consistent. the hook was ok, one thing i didnt like about the hook though was the echo u put on there. maybe try lowering the volume of it next time, just so it can be heard slightly. coz i think the hook would have been alot better without the echo. other than that i think the track was tight. just keep spittin and you'll elevate. -1-

[Frank P.]

the flow is a little bit shaky..lyrics are good, voice is aiight..after seeing all your bullshit commentary in this forum i figured you as two possible rappers..one with a gassed head whos realy just wack..or one who actually has the juice to back up his bullshit..well..lucky for you, you're neither..in all honesty i expected this to make me a little nervous..i get that way when i sense a challenge..it feeds my adrenaline..i love that shit..but in all reality this is a mid-range profile..average/in-development skill flippin a little messege..which is where i'm sending credit to here..the messege was tite..i cant feel this as much as other cats might..because you're eyes are larger than your stomach..i had expectations for this and they didnt follow through..so i'm kinda like "eh..hes all talk" ya know?..

-10

[Cinquix Incision]

the flow is ok not all there but im likin it over all..and yes the lyrics are good structure to the whole thing and the words go great with the whole song......

nice

[Hail the Vibe]

Beat :: I've heard this before. I like it. Real nice.

Flow :: On point through it all. Came off exactly zero times.

Lyrics :: Real nice here. 'Raining from on orphon' real deep there. 'I was muted and yelled' I really liked that line. 'Gotta live to fight, fight to live' line was niceness. Closing bar of second verse was real nice as well.

Hook :: Ehh, real nice at first, but got kinda annoying near the end when it played about 10 times.

Quality :: Good, could be up'd though. Thanks for postin' the lyrics!

Overall :: Real real nice track here mayne. I love songs like these. The slower ones are always good.

What beat is it by the way?

[Emerge]

the flow is a little bit shaky..lyrics are good, voice is aiight..after seeing all your bullshit commentary in this forum i figured you as two possible rappers..one with a gassed head whos realy just wack..or one who actually has the juice to back up his bullshit..well..lucky for you, you're neither..in all honesty i expected this to make me a little nervous..i get that way when i sense a challenge..it feeds my adrenaline..i love that shit..but in all reality this is a mid-range profile..average/in-development skill flippin a little messege..which is where i'm sending credit to here..the messege was tite..i cant feel this as much as other cats might..because you're eyes are larger than your stomach..i had expectations for this and they didnt follow through..so i'm kinda like "eh..hes all talk" ya know?..

-10

I agree with my flow being shaky. Bullshit commentary? Excuse me? I mean other than people argueing and senseless beef i always give people honest good feed dog. And yeah I am in development for the simple matter that I've been doing this for what... like 6 months and I dont drop tracks or practice as much as I should. As far as the expectations I'm sorry lol I dont know what to say. This song wasnt intended for an audience per say it was more for myself.. i just wanted to share it with people

thanks for the honest thoughts

[SMZ]

voice needs a little more edge - rhyme seemed bit tighter in the first verse - orphan and world spinning lines stood out - otherwise lyrics were mostly coo with a couple lines I didn't like, where seemed to drift from the theme - chorus was coo - could use a bit more umph in your voice for it though - pretty coo - peace

[Brandon Heat]

beat... You could have made it... loser... - a billion points...

Content: Tricky... it's your life... so I'll only comment on how I think you delivered it... not bad... better than most...

flow: *sigh* shakey as hell... it's just not consistent... in parts it is there... but it isn't for the most part... again better than most...

Fuck it...


all in all... 6/10...

[Mixed Toxins]

Hook was okay, Voice sorta up and down. Your voice sounds like that guy from Lincon Park.
OverAll

8.5/10

[BIZ.VICIOUS]

That was nice. Good delivery, felt the emotion, kinda metaforical type shit on the hook....

shit burns you gotta release the pain, and you delivered nicley. Only thing I can think of, is you rush'd a bit and fell a lil off at 2 points....but minor.....I really like.

Go get that beat from the battle thread...

[The-Heir]

shit is to fucking loud dog.

just need more emotion/practice

[Emerge]

Yeah mix is pretty much poopy. lol if you can even call it a mix

once i get a doper mic ill try to make things sound good

thanks for the peep

[The-Heir]

Yeah mix is pretty much poopy. lol if you can even call it a mix

once i get a doper mic ill try to make things sound good

thanks for the peep

not concerned with the quality. its the overall volume of the mix.