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  1. December 16th, 2004, 10:30 PM #1
    gem n eye
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    this mutha fucka....

    PBKs got issues
    He's going bald with chin pubes
    He probably jacks off to 'Chewy' into a peice a tissue- paper
    BK just may be a date raper
    Somebody save her from this forum
    Before I make it dangerous
    His brain, it just, doesnt seem to say as much
    His hanes are crusting from fucking ugly dames, he's a
    fuckin gay paradist, he likes to take it in his anus
    Like a stain, his spray is heinous
    In a way he loves to hate this
    You'll never play out, be famous one day or be the greatest
    Cuz everybody'll point and say, "Hey, look! It's David Smith"
    Bitch
    Now who's the baddest?
    Im slim, just not the Mathers
    Your wack, your girls been havin attractions to other matters at hand
    Cuz youre inadequate
    Snort ten grams, an addict fix
    Poor bitch mans been abstinent
    From packin crack, fag accident
    ooooooh, now thats a fashioned spit
    Hocker back, slipped past my lip
    You better grab an aspirin, quick
    Cuz Davids back, he's ass kickin this Kid

    ;-) Bitch
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  2. December 16th, 2004, 10:43 PM #2
    fu2re troublez
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    yo i liked these bars you really picked it up towarrds the end... waitin fo pbk's response, and in the mean time leave me some feedback on my peice "thy eye"

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...40#post1910040
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  3. December 17th, 2004, 02:17 AM #3
    Mistral
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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  4. December 17th, 2004, 12:38 PM #4
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    this post was ok, nothing special a couple of good punches and that was it, ya flow is average, just keep writing and you'll improve, peace.
    reply 2 my new post
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160700
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  5. December 20th, 2004, 05:39 AM #5
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    uh this piece was ok. it had some good punches i guess. aight structure. just elevate with your rhyming...peace
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  6. December 20th, 2004, 10:39 AM #6
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    yeah end was good, some of the stuff rapped about was ummm i ono, but overall ya skills is developing nicely...
    PART II
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  7. December 20th, 2004, 10:46 AM #7
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    this was nicely done......a lil work is needed but overall it was good.....and i liked how it picked up at the end....good effect i find...good job
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  8. December 20th, 2004, 11:26 AM #8
    Predatorian
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    good end... but yeah, it was pretty cool... I dig it all.... Peace out, keep elavatin
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