My flow is hot

[Omniscient]

My rhymes make u think ya listenin to scriptures
Um hot now u could find me on google pictures
Check my connects i probably got more than dj clue
Um internationally known u could find me on yahoo
Or even on e-bay sellin x, weed or coke
Shit i’ll probably even sell u some rocks with dope
I know um crazy but that don’t mean um not smart
I still know how to drop a nigga with ah dart
And um not talking bout something u throw at a board
When this shit hits u you’ll be on an IV cord
Blood drippin out lookin like someone spilled ketchup
So if ya got a phone it would be wise to call make up
I’ll rip u niggaz easy like a no brand paper towel
Just like what 50 said in 2002 um “got me a bottle”
Cus i buy out da bar if it has henecy and Bacardi
Then get it krunk in here so i could start da party
Aint nothing changed i still luv da hood
Even if its fuckin me up to da point were nothings good
I follow street rules like it was my religion
It seems like um always shitin on niggaz like ah pigeon
But don’t confuse me with no busta or snitch
Trust me before i do that shit i’ll go in a ditch
In fact da last person who done that left in a box
For one slip out his mouth he got filled with rocks


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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160590

[O'Fortune]

Try counting syllables blood.

[fastforwords]

holy cow. go get a labotomy, have half
of your brain removed and try writing again.
your flow was awful and your topic choice
in general made me contimplate suicide.
no one likes an internet thug, so chill. look in
SS for some topics that arent drugs, guns or
bitches. no one cares, keep up and elevate.

[The Root]

i read like four bars and realized this is garbage... i suggest what the dude above me suggested...

pz

[warchild]

sorry son this was poor, i can out flow you on one reply, here i go, you say ya flow is hot, i only got one thing to say no it's not, keep writing kid you will improve.