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Thread: Letter to my Unborn Daughter

  1. #1
    G-Money
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    Letter to my Unborn Daughter

    u see since the last year my life's been a struggle
    no parents, jus runnin the streets gettin into trouble
    mom was always workin, dad was jus gone
    i know this is startin off as jus another sad song
    all i had was my friends, n they still here
    now my daughters comin thats the only thing i fear
    cuz her daddy hasnt got a break
    n i know once shes born everyday my hearts gon ache
    i dont want her growin up in agony
    year after year, its jus phycological tragedy
    but i wont let that intervene wit me being a proud father
    havin that feelin of knowin my daugthers' gettin smarter
    education is knowledge n knowledge is education
    i jus cant wait til the day im standing happy at her graduation
    patiently waiting for her walk the isle, n see her smile
    i havent been happy in a while, n for her
    shes the only women i wouldnt hesitate to walk a mile, four
    or more, if i had this end happily then it would jus be folk-lore
    one thing i know is that she will be healthly
    imma make sure i bust my ass for her to live wealthly
    even if its without me, hopefully not
    hopefully i wont be put in that spot
    or position where im constantly bitchin
    for this lil gurl i have nothin but good intentions
    imma teach her to defend herself so she can beat foo's up
    imma also teach the jump shot so she can ball foo's up
    imma make sure in my lesson to mention that all guys are dogs
    they dont love u, they jus there for one cause
    n thats to hit it n quit it
    imma let her know that her daddy done did it
    i jus wanna make sure that she knows her daddy loves her to death
    n that imma always be there til the day of my death

    i love you baby gurl!!!

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    word........Lots of emotion......good way to get all this pressure off your cheast.....You know I've been there from the start and I'll be there till the end.......Thats what homies do.....stay up

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    thats some emotional shit, yeah i rearly liked that, you gots some fuckin talent! some things didnt ryhme but still worked well- as they describe it on ebay AAAAAA++++++
    "Ayo the lyrical law, like you dont already know"


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    thanks for the feedback..... i appreciate it keep it comin ~ one ~

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    that's some good shit u got back there, emotion is the key to everything, if you've got emotion, you've won yourself a self-respecting award, but what am i sayin, keep that shit comin, i can tell ur gonna elevate alot soon
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    thanks again for the feed..... lets get some more in ......

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    yo i agree with the rest of them, these was some deep emotional rhymes from the heart, some good advice in their for ya daughter 2 when she gets 2 read it, great post peace.

    reply 2 my last post if u got the time man l8r

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160085

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    G-Money
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    uppin.... for feedback

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