10 Lines
House rules.
No feeding.
I drop first.
Feeble
SirusX
10 Lines
House rules.
No feeding.
I drop first.
'john’ – is a man who pays for sex.
‘loose leaf’ – refers to flimsy text.
Dude’s a bust.. straight fronting like John Daily
This kids the only ‘John’ that pays for a maybe
U’ aliased as a confused Lemming lost with nothing to follow
This feeble mind’s hollow, confused to exactly where’s waldo?
Feeble, your asking for votes.. There’s no way to live up
Feeb tries to stand out but trips up over his own tip cup
Known to catch and blow fish like your name was Hootie
I’ll treat you like weed and prove your game is loose leaf
It’s simple your just too easy to diss bitch.. bare witness
& Have a very Merry Christmas Stuck in a canary’s shit-list
it would be funny if Feeble didnt show.
I have less than 100 votes
pretty sick rhyme....has good flow structure and wordin...i'll post when he posts his stuff
man you just bitched at someone in out battle about not freeposting, and then you do it here.
no wonder your banned.
I didn't even know you set this... i'll post, im voting on battles right now.
word..and yes, i dont know why i edited this
o_0
- Celes Teal
Last edited by Cels; December 15th, 2004 at 08:33 PM
ok. i didnt think you would no-show.
but i went ahead with what you said.
whats your name - who are you? everything i drops dope & hot
are you sirius? cuz after that verse i'm really hoping not
u can't cope alot, i make you lose, & demand it hoe
your the first kid to make a sig bout where he doesnt plan to go
your career took a high dive, i dont fool with gloaters
you Flip good- but it won't go well with the Pool of voters
i touched a nerve,its chemistry- abandon luck n panic
cuz he'll reach his boiling point... then fucking vanish
good is what u try to be, but its tyranny; heres the irony
i skinned this faggot.. so he can't help but hide from me
its over. bitch.
good drop, for the ammount of time you took. nevertheless lets get some votes.
Yeah, i took less than 15 minutes. Probably closer to 10. Up.
Sorry, i just checked the time. I took close to 20. *shrugs*
well..feeble's whole entire verse was pretty much hitting.. and SirusX's entire verse was pretty much not hitting.. so this battle isnt very hard to vote on.. Feeble came pretty nice, some good punches
u can't cope alot, i make you lose, & demand it hoe
your the first kid to make a sig bout where he doesnt plan to go
^ was my favorite bar out of your verse, gave me a little chuckle.. your opener was nice too.. more of the OHH SHIT type though
Sirus work on ya punch concepts.. they were all played
so
V/ Feebs for a fresher verse
easiy to say when your last post was an hour ago.
Keep feeding the sheep nonsence.
Also, a little funny that you vote on this battle,
when you hardly vote in FL...
up.
ayo sirusX in da very beginning when u wrote da shit so niggas can get ur punchlines dont do it again, if dey get it dey get it. any way i kinda like those punches though. ur flow was kinda off and i remember one personal.
ayo feeble minded i see u still at it. anyway, ur punches where hard and stuck in mah mind. ur flow was good and da one personal u had i liked won it for u.
Da winna: Feeble Minded
vote for mah battle in mah sig
Da KiD iS iN dA FoRuM BUiLdInG!!!!!!!!!!!!