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    Keep It Straight

    I already know this game won’t accept me
    But did you really expect me to respect thief’s?
    I'm set to prove that originality is sexy
    This attitude is the only thing that kept me
    Blood Hungry for the fleshy fresh meat
    So step up and try your luck
    And watch as I mesh beats w/ text sheets
    Let correct speech protect you parakeets
    From the demons inside my head that never sleep
    I never seek out to defeat the meek crowd
    I’d rather spend my time watching each cloud
    Weep down upon our dusty earth
    Purifying the rusty dirt, for what its worth
    I never relyed on tears to define the hurt
    Cuz the 1st cry of fear was the sign of birth
    The 21tst times are cursed but my mind is worse
    I mean I see these problems…
    … but I’d rather rhyme a verse
    Then attempt to solve them…


    Backing down from the devils gate your fate is crooked…
    A dance with Dante’s minions is quit to get your life took’en
    Even when your shoe fits those foot-prints in the sand
    …Sirus doesn’t walk with you…. he buries you man

    Fuck following the footprints of chump-change in Reeboks
    If you want to be the king of the jungle…
    …. swing from the tree-tops
    Sing the tongue of the Ewocks, & Detox your inner beat box
    Long enough to sweet talk V. Fox…
    …into picking the pearly gates key-lock
    Side by side we walk, following the street signs of the universe
    My ferocity summons a curse… scheming a thunderous verse
    While two demons on my shoulders keep for-telling my fate
    The guardian angle lays innate cuz I just cant keep straight
    It’s the same shit were dealing with every year
    Some call it racism but I think it’s jealous fear
    Pac was always the inner cities inner ear
    ...But I still wonder if heaven is near
    I’m revving the engine making the gears spin…
    Shedding these tears throughout these years
    Nothings ever been clear cuz I only hear sin…

    While two demons on my shoulders keep for-telling my fate
    The guardian angle lays innate cuz I just cant keep straight

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    Genocide`
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    One word can describe your whole verse: Amazing This was so dope and so real to me.. I'm at a loss for words. Great drop, 10/10.. I can't give any advice.. because there is none.......just, wow. *leaves thread in a different state of mind*

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    Nice verse man word on that ......but TNL sucks....lol

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    Thx for replys..

    Since when did you tag effect your verse?

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    up again.. dont sleep on this people

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    Very dope Sirus. I agree with Geno, on every aspect.

    Keep the mic's comin' man, i like peepin' it.

    check out: Young Heads

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    I will, thx for the reply.

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    up.

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    man that was dope...word to genocide....just wow.....that was amazin man i hope you keep em comin so i can keep readin that shit...damn man

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    again thanks.

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    K-r-u-n-k...................

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    thx.

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    actually genocide got it right 10/10 flawless verse
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Yo everybody else mainly said what i wanted too...so i rate it 10/10 great vocab and hot rhymes good flow and good structure...keep it comin

    Check out my post-

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=159737

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