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Thread: In Between The Glaze

  1. December 13th, 2004, 08:02 PM #1
    Dan Dare
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    In Between The Glaze

    Gone!
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  2. December 13th, 2004, 08:22 PM #2
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  3. December 13th, 2004, 08:54 PM #3
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    Up! You motherfucking Fugmuggins!
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  4. December 13th, 2004, 08:56 PM #4
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    lol iight sence you put it that away check mine out also
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  5. December 13th, 2004, 08:57 PM #5
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    dope i like your style, hit myne up.
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  6. December 13th, 2004, 09:29 PM #6
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    erm....okayyy......

    well. Up.
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  7. December 14th, 2004, 08:03 AM #7
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  8. December 14th, 2004, 07:26 PM #8
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    Nice Drop man, liked it a lot. You structured it well and it had good flow and multies. It was a good read through. Made me feel for the carachter of phyliss. Made me a little sad when she dies. You kept the peice entertaining for the whole, pretty consistent and an overall good drop.
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  9. December 14th, 2004, 08:21 PM #9
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    Yeah i liked this a lot , it had good rhymes and a good story behind it, well structured.. i liked the read and it flowed nicely as well.. keep up the good work
    much luv


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  10. December 15th, 2004, 11:57 AM #10
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    thank you guys

    Notty I replied to yours already.

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    I don't know what to say. I would describe this as a dry poem.

    if you could understand that

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  12. December 18th, 2004, 07:47 PM #12
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    Yeah, it's more geared as a poem than anything else. I put it in PS too, I just put it in here to see what responses it would get here. thanks for reading anyway.
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  13. December 19th, 2004, 12:28 AM #13
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    ya it was nice...good structure and everything to it im liking it, nice sceam and carried thoughts in my mind u gave me into u while u put them in words...

    overall im liking it

    nice g'job man...
    "ya i see you nigguhs mean muggin on poarches, unload that clip and watch em scatter like roaches"
    ima foo wit it! girl gimme dat pussy i kno wut to do wit it!

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  14. December 20th, 2004, 05:29 AM #14
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    its pretty dope, i like the storyline and the rhymes. it had good structure too. keep it up and keep elevatin...peace
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